Seize and See.
May I
grasp every moment
and not
let it pass unnoticed.
Might I
seize Now's ability
lest I
lose its virility.
Let me
look at life further
and see
Now as eternal.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: October 16th, 2022 10:31
- Comment from author about the poem: A bit of weekend introspection after re-reading The Power of Now.
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- Users favorite of this poem: Doggerel Dave, Rocky Lagou
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Comments6
'Now' I say it's a good write. Erm, not this moment 'now'. The moment 5 seconds ago when I first typed 'now'.
And now I'm a confused laddie! lol.
Powerful poetry indeed Fay .. Can I take two big slices & a smaller one for Ron ... that's not a friend or relative by the way, I mean later Ron ..... 🙂 x
Cors u can me clever ansum jsut elp yeself ta two and a bit slices says she gigglin' at that poor Ron who may cum later. - - -- methinks you feelin' better already eh ? ............x.
A little gem, Fay. And as a solid reinforcement for my attempted focus on the here and now, it is strong enough to need no additional supplement...... for now!
Hi Dave -- - am delighted you like my take on the importance of every moment and thank you for adding the lines to your faves. ---- - - I agree right now is always enough.
Thoroughly agree with your words Fay.
Andy
Yes the Now is important dear Andy - - I guessed the few lines would appeal to you
I love this Fay, thanks for your unending wisdom and sagacity. This feels like a warm embrace with the present. I feel like oftentimes we tend to dread the future, especially the mysterious afterlife, but I think living in the "now" brings so much more peace. Glorious poem!
Carpe diem! Well expressed. I too believe that there only is the present and one should live in it. Well done.
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