Come Back

Fay Slimm.

 

Come Back.

Perhaps the tumultuous love

we shared before
before will be soon resumed

breaking months

of lonely into lucid excitement 
as fate becomes

drenched in emotional rises

and ebbs die
with fervent persistence.


Spliced together at last old

vows made in turbulent waters
could leave tidal shallows 

and find rest from clamorous 

union for binding new 
to sense of time we should then 

live better without

vibration of constant termagant. 

So come back in sight over 

the horizon my fisherman's boat

I no longer haggle and

for you I am hungry

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 17th, 2023 05:23
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Good write Fay.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Thanking you kindly dear Orchi

    • Neville


      I can damn near taste the salt as I hit these keys .. this is magnificent Fay .. a proper poem of love and longing ....... x

      • Fay Slimm.

        You are more than most generous dear amigo - - so so pleased could relate to the metaphors used in this rather verbose piece of reflection on a rather stormy love-life...............x

      • Rocky Lagou

        This oceanic metaphor for a relationship is so apt for what you're describing.

        The way this bond is being described as "tumultuous" and "clamorous" gives so much weight to your poem.

        I think this is something that many people can relate to, not just in romantic relations, but also platonic ones, too.

        My stepmother tends to be this "termagant" that you've pictured above.

        This is divine.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Yes the scene could be the result of any semi-rumbustious relationship I do agree my friend. A load of thanks for your enthusiastic and very supportive in -put dear Rocky

        • Goldfinch60

          Wonderful longing words Fay.

          Andy

          • Fay Slimm.

            Thanking you very much for your visit and comment dear Andy.



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