Do I really deserve this garden
Where I blossomed arrogantly; in care,
Forgetful of the blessed soil
Which holds me together as a whole.
The rains that replenish my shoots
I take it as my right.
The constant calm of the breeze
I never knew.
And I flourish forth thinking of me
Thinking only because of me.
The foolish pride I feel
about my little flowerings
The gardener takes it with a smile,
Clearing ever the weeds
for me to thrive in peace.
And the light of those who knows
kept my darkness within bounds.
Fallen I would have easily in my beginnings
but for the mercy of all who never left.
And in a silent moment of my given tranquility
A sliver of truth shines bright.
And it prompts me to ask again
Do I really deserve this garden.
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a drop of mind (
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Comments2
Omg. This reminds me of the Garden of Eden. Especially with the undertones of pride and arrogance; reminiscent of those that led Eve to bite the forbidden fruit. This is splendid.
thank you.
Interesting and nicely expressed writing )
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