Let’s Talk About the Weather for Once
Yes, the weather is being kind to us ..
But then,
there is talk of snow too my love ..
And yes, of course
I spoke to the moon and to the stars
again last night ..
As indeed, I always do
and for a moment then, the sky was
filled, with my words only
and which seemed to form a prayer ..
Now though,
I sit here, sipping strong black coffee
and smiling vaguely
in what feels to me, like your direction ..
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How am I the first to review this? lol Anyway, i love how you ended the poem "smiling vaguely...." lets not talk about the weather....it is horrible! LOL Beautiful poem, N!
You are & indeed, I thank you for it .. 🙂
Good write N.
Write good O 🙂
A warm moment of weather talk before that vague smile in a lover's direction means she knows there is heat in the air despite any forecast of snow - -- and methinks t'will grow even hotter when weather's forgotten...................x
we all need something to look forward to .. don't we Fay .. x
Cool and enigmatic, Nev...enjoyed.
That'll do nicely .. Cheers Dave
Wonderful words Neville, when I got up before dawn this morning the moon was shining brightly starting my day with wonder.
Andy
Me too, glorious isn't it with just a touch of frost on the hill but with the sun clearly not too far behind 🙂
'and smiling vaguely'
that smile, blossoming
from a heart, in a most
contemplatively melancholic
frame
of remembrance and appreciation
..
for those who know, Hyung
these words will hit home
deeper, than any love song...
(Brilliant!)
Bless you Mek
I adore this!
The way in which you breathe something special into each of your poems is amazing.
I feel like at the heart of small talk is always the weather. It's what comes most natural to us. But sometimes those small conversations can lead to a lifetime of love and admiration for one another. A seemingly trivial interaction can hold the key to a rich and intimate bond.
what a delightful thing to say Rocky .. many thank you's my friend .. so very much appreciated 🙂
Very nice, Nev.
thank you kindly hzugman for the visit and subsequent formulation .. both are magnificently appreciated 🙂
Neville, thoroughly impressed with your body of work.
Delightful and inspiring.
You are far too generous sir James .. but I would indeed be writing huge porky pies if I suggested even for a micro second that I didn't both like and appreciate it .. Many thanks .. Neville 🙂
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