River And Time.

Goldfinch60



My River flows beside me,

Its gentle soul passes by.

I touch it and feel it,

I know it is part of my life

And that I will not touch that part,

Not touch that part again

As it has passed me by

On its journey to infinity.

 

Time is like a river,

Every moment passes

And that moment will not touch us,

Will not touch us again,

And we will  not touch that moment again.

Moments are important in life

So enjoy every one of them,

Enjoy every moment of your life.

 

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 6th, 2023 01:58
  • Comment from author about the poem: Every moment is important in our lives, as it is in the video I have loaded.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 28
  • Users favorite of this poem: Rocky Lagou
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.
    There are some hymns mentioning rivers too. Time for a song - by me. Arrggh!
    You know the imaginary song - 'By a river far away' - further away the better! heehee.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi.

      Yes the further away the better.

      Andy

    • Neville


      there is something timeless about a good old river regardless of whether it rushes past or meanders more slowly .. I can see where you are coming from sir ..

      • Goldfinch60

        There certainly is Neville, thank you for your comment.

        Andy

      • sorenbarrett

        Rivers meander and they rush, they flood and they dribble by. Time too seems like this and as they say you can never stand in the same river twice. Nice write

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you soren, so very true.

          Andy

        • Fay Slimm.

          I love the imagery of time like a river passing by - - such a wise piece of advice on how to appreciate each moment of life - - thank you for the wonderful video too dear Andy.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Fay, much appreciated.

            Andy

          • L. B. Mek

            Amen!
            thank you Andy

            • Goldfinch60

              Amen indeed Mek, thank you.

              Andy

            • Doggerel Dave

              Good write, Andy.

            • Bella Shepard

              Your analogy of the river and time is perfect. This is so beautifully and lovingly written it touches a chord very deep within, as I read and listen to your extraordinary choice of music. This is a true fav.

              • Goldfinch60

                Most kind Bella and much appreciated.

                Andy

              • Christina8

                Beautiful thought here written so lovely. May you make wonderful memories today!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Christina, most kind.

                  Andy

                • Rocky Lagou

                  This is rejuvenating. Thank you for this splendorous journey through time.
                  Utilizing the river as a metaphor also sets the peaceful and pensive tone of this poem. Life is precious, and we ought to make the most of it.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Very true Rocky, life is so very precious and we must enjoy every moment.

                    Andy



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