Dance of The Wind Children
no matter where on earth, on such windy days
all dandelion children,
must each go, their very own separate ways ..
Love love this mighty shorty.............
many of my most humongous thank you's Lorna 🌹
Good for you...... you know how to spell that word! I wouldn't know where to begin.......
"Dance of the Wind Children" is a beautiful poem that celebrates the free-spirited nature of youth and the importance of individuality.
You got me my friend ........................ thank you 🐧:)
Awesome image here and like a video playing in my head N! Let's join the dance though we remain at our corners.
tis indeed crucial .................. cheers cb 🙂
Good write N. Wish KP would go her separate ways, but she always come back like a bad.... penny/apple/smell/ boomerang! lol.
write good then ..
I like this short poem, so descriptive and well done!
I like the fact you say you like it .. thank you 🙂
"Dandelion children," or our own they must all go... their separate ways." A great take on letting go. - Phil A.
You got me Phil .. I could darn near feel it sir .. Thank you ..
So very true Neville, we must not stop them from going their own way. Andy
glad you could see it my way Andy 🙂
Omg, "dandelion children," literally so exact and evocative of my own childhood. Thanks Neville for your eternal wisdom.
and thank you too my friend for visiting this little scribble Rocky ..
Ngl I'd expect this to be taught in my english class. Sad it isnt.
.......................... cool 🙂
Beautiful!!! I shall come back to these words time n again dear cherished friend
that feels so good .. thank you brother Mek
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Love love this mighty shorty.............
many of my most humongous thank you's Lorna 🌹
Good for you...... you know how to spell that word! I wouldn't know where to begin.......
"Dance of the Wind Children" is a beautiful poem that celebrates the free-spirited nature of youth and the importance of individuality.
You got me my friend ........................ thank you 🐧:)
Awesome image here and like a video playing in my head N! Let's join the dance though we remain at our corners.
tis indeed crucial .................. cheers cb 🙂
Good write N.
Wish KP would go her separate ways, but she always come back like a bad.... penny/apple/smell/ boomerang! lol.
write good then ..
I like this short poem, so descriptive and well done!
I like the fact you say you like it .. thank you 🙂
"Dandelion children," or our own they must all go... their separate ways." A great take on letting go. - Phil A.
You got me Phil .. I could darn near feel it sir .. Thank you ..
So very true Neville, we must not stop them from going their own way.
Andy
glad you could see it my way Andy 🙂
Omg, "dandelion children," literally so exact and evocative of my own childhood. Thanks Neville for your eternal wisdom.
and thank you too my friend for visiting this little scribble Rocky ..
Ngl I'd expect this to be taught in my english class. Sad it isnt.
.......................... cool 🙂
Beautiful!!!
I shall come back to these words time n again
dear cherished friend
that feels so good .. thank you brother Mek
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