Dance of The Wind Children

Neville


Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍

Dance of The Wind Children

 

no matter where on earth, on such windy days

 all dandelion children,

must each go, their very own separate ways ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 5th, 2023 03:40
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 31
  • Users favorite of this poem: Lorna, L. B. Mek
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  • Lorna

    Love love this mighty shorty.............

    • Neville



      many of my most humongous thank you's Lorna 🌹

      • Lorna

        Good for you...... you know how to spell that word! I wouldn't know where to begin.......

      • Mottakeenur Rehman

        "Dance of the Wind Children" is a beautiful poem that celebrates the free-spirited nature of youth and the importance of individuality.

        • Neville



          You got me my friend ........................ thank you 🐧:)

        • arqios

          Awesome image here and like a video playing in my head N! Let's join the dance though we remain at our corners.

          • Neville



            tis indeed crucial .................. cheers cb 🙂

          • orchidee

            Good write N.
            Wish KP would go her separate ways, but she always come back like a bad.... penny/apple/smell/ boomerang! lol.

            • Neville



              write good then ..

            • Christina8

              I like this short poem, so descriptive and well done!

              • Neville



                I like the fact you say you like it .. thank you 🙂

              • MendedFences27

                "Dandelion children," or our own they must all go... their separate ways." A great take on letting go. - Phil A.

                • Neville



                  You got me Phil .. I could darn near feel it sir .. Thank you ..

                • Goldfinch60

                  So very true Neville, we must not stop them from going their own way.

                  Andy

                  • Neville



                    glad you could see it my way Andy 🙂

                  • Rocky Lagou

                    Omg, "dandelion children," literally so exact and evocative of my own childhood. Thanks Neville for your eternal wisdom.

                    • Neville



                      and thank you too my friend for visiting this little scribble Rocky ..

                    • MysteryGhost

                      Ngl I'd expect this to be taught in my english class. Sad it isnt.

                      • Neville



                        .......................... cool 🙂

                      • L. B. Mek

                        Beautiful!!!
                        I shall come back to these words time n again
                        dear cherished friend

                        • Neville



                          that feels so good .. thank you brother Mek



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