Dance of The Wind Children

Neville

Dance of The Wind Children

 

no matter where on earth, on such windy days

 all dandelion children,

must each go, their very own separate ways ..

 

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  • Lorna

    Love love this mighty shorty.............

    • Neville



      many of my most humongous thank you's Lorna 🌹

      • Lorna

        Good for you...... you know how to spell that word! I wouldn't know where to begin.......

      • Mottakeenur Rehman

        "Dance of the Wind Children" is a beautiful poem that celebrates the free-spirited nature of youth and the importance of individuality.

        • Neville



          You got me my friend ........................ thank you 🐧:)

        • arqios

          Awesome image here and like a video playing in my head N! Let's join the dance though we remain at our corners.

          • Neville



            tis indeed crucial .................. cheers cb 🙂

          • Accidental Poet

            All children dance to the beat of a different drum. Let them dance on, and on, and on... 👍

            • Neville



              I get the feeling it wasn't the wind that blew you here was it you old rascal .. 🐧 🙂

              • Accidental Poet

                No N, I danced my way here to the beat of my own drum. And as always, glad I did. 😁

              • orchidee

                Good write N.
                Wish KP would go her separate ways, but she always come back like a bad.... penny/apple/smell/ boomerang! lol.

                • Neville



                  write good then ..

                • Christina8

                  I like this short poem, so descriptive and well done!

                  • Neville



                    I like the fact you say you like it .. thank you 🙂

                  • MendedFences27

                    "Dandelion children," or our own they must all go... their separate ways." A great take on letting go. - Phil A.

                    • Neville



                      You got me Phil .. I could darn near feel it sir .. Thank you ..

                    • Goldfinch60

                      So very true Neville, we must not stop them from going their own way.

                      Andy

                      • Neville



                        glad you could see it my way Andy 🙂

                      • Rocky Lagou

                        Omg, "dandelion children," literally so exact and evocative of my own childhood. Thanks Neville for your eternal wisdom.

                        • Neville



                          and thank you too my friend for visiting this little scribble Rocky ..

                        • MysteryGhost

                          Ngl I'd expect this to be taught in my english class. Sad it isnt.

                          • Neville



                            .......................... cool 🙂

                          • L. B. Mek

                            Beautiful!!!
                            I shall come back to these words time n again
                            dear cherished friend

                            • Neville



                              that feels so good .. thank you brother Mek



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