Take a Look at What You Could Be Missing

Neville

Take a Look at What You Could Be Missing

 

Just look at this, you could have had it all

every single molecule

and atom even, of my body, heart and soul ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 29th, 2023 13:16
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 13
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • Bobby O

    If you gotta tell them it’s usually too late.

    • Neville



      it was on this occasion .. cheers.

    • Goldfinch60

      If only ........

      Andy

      • Neville



        ............................................. indeed
        Neville

      • orchidee

        Aghh! This is what KP said to me. it made me run a mile - well, 20 miles away! lol.

        • Neville



          by the way, which one is you and which one is KP and no wonder if you ran that far you wore your feet away

        • Accidental Poet

          Thier loss N. 😏

          • Neville



            Maybe, cheers AP or should that read cheers, maybe AP πŸ™‚

          • L. B. Mek

            (Yeah! you're damn right
            her loss
            'but why is it, my burden...')
            lol
            another great shorty Hyung
            (sorry for my skewed, take
            thanks for putting up with me)

            • Neville



              I think that's a brilliant take .. it feels like a ricochet of empathy caught me during free fall and allowed me to land on my feet .. πŸ™‚

              • L. B. Mek

                'a ricochet of empathy
                caught me during free fall
                and allowed me
                to land on my feet ..'
                (this, should be on a t-shirt
                or framed
                hanging on wisdom's wall!)



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