Notice of absence from Abby1234
I won't be on on weekends or in the summer.
I won't be on on weekends or in the summer.
You are always there.
Always comfort me.
I can't imagine you gone.
I can't imagine living a life without you.
You bring life into this world.
You are my sunshine.
If your gone, I don't know what I would do.
You and I are just alike.
We want what's best for each other.
We are always there for each other.
Just so you know, I'm not going anywhere.
If I do go somewhere, I'll still think of you.
After all you are my sister.
Christine, I love you so much.
I sometimes don't show it, but I do.
Everybody has odd ways of showing how we love each other.
I love you.
I love your smile.
I love your laugh.
You are beautiful even when you don't think you are.
You try your best in things.
I am so glad to have a sister like you.
I love you Christine.
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Author:
Abby Rose Wise (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 2nd, 2023 09:08
- Comment from author about the poem: You don't know when will be the last time you get to see somebody. So I decided to write something for my sister. It's just before it's to late.
- Category: Letter
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Comments6
Hey Abby it pains me to feel the hurt in your poetry , all i can offer is an avenue of communication for your troubles .
thank you. I know that it shows hurt but I feel like some people need to know how I feel.
Hey Abby i fully understand that even in your desperation you are trying to relate with others in a similar position as yours and help them through your journey , i wish there was a simple release for all suffers. i can only wish you well and some comfort come to you very soon. Peace.
Lovely tribute to your sister, Abby. I'm even decades older than you and just now coming into poetry. Keep your heart open and thank you for sharing.
Thank you.
it is indeed very sweet but in the 7th line instead of saying die u could have used something like "if u r gone" or an imagery. That direct approach to "death" is somehow defeating the poetic purpose
Thank you for the tip. I went back and fixed it.
it is a very nice and sweet poem, keep it up
Very sweet words for your sister Abby,
Never lose that love in your heart dear, it's a very special and previous thing, cherish it
I can appreciate the motivation behind this poem of yours .. I note that most if not all your portfolio to date has a depressive flavour and often leaves a sad aftertaste .. I sincerely hope that one day soon your situation, circumstances and perception of life in general assumes a more positive and indeed balanced stance .. I would also urge you to keep writing as I get the impression you are very good at it and that you get something out of it in return .. All Good Things, Neville 🙂
Smart to admit love brings us a world greater than one can see. I had TO DOUBLE CHECK your age. Much wisdom displayed here. Keep writing and the bits of sadness that you bravely convey will be more easily managed and the celebration of the bits of joy will build momentum. Nice piece
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