MISSED TAKES (0riginal version)

Bobby O

MISSED TAKES 1st version
So I've been trying to write a story,
But it turned into a song
There's no villain
No  Hero's Glory
In this tale they don't belong  
No dramatic pause
No twists. No turns 
No lessons to be
learned  
But I have to sing cuz my writings blurry cuz
I've been crying all night long
Trying to write this story, and it turned into a song. 

Surely, The plot already you surmise, cue nary a violin to announce cliche’
No mystery here and no surprise 
I spoke those words, the ones I’d sworn I’d never say
It didn’t twist , It didn’t turn , no lesson learned , She got her way 
So I was wrong , There is a villain in this story 
Complete with lyrics that don’t belong
Writing not of Heroes Glory
At Least I turned it all , into a song   
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  • Author: Bobby O (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 4th, 2023 00:48
  • Comment from author about the poem: The more esoteric version
  • Category: Reflection
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