I Do Now.

Goldfinch60



We came together over a cup of coffee,
We chatted, we laughed
And we fell in love.
We started to walk down the street,
She said “Do you have everything?”
I took her hand and replied,
“I do now”.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 15th, 2023 00:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: All I did was ask her out for coffee and now we have been as one for over a year
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 16
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Jerry Reynolds, B.E.Poet
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  • David Wakeling

    This is a lovely piece.My god the platters.I haven't heard music like that for years.Glorious

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you David, much appreciated.

      Andy

    • Neville



      sweet .. in fact like one of Mr. Kipling's cakes, exceedingly good 🙂

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Neville, much appreciated.

        Andy

      • orchidee

        Good write Gold.
        KP asked me that, and I said 'Nope; I have nothing now; why you trick me into marrying you that Halloween?' lol.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thanks Orchi.

          • orchidee

            I regret the day I said 'I do' to her! lol. Were you at the wedding?

            • Goldfinch60

              Yes I was at the back laughing my head off!

            • L. B. Mek

              Congratulations! Andy
              and many happy returns
              🍾🥂

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Mek, much appreciated.

                Andy

              • Accidental Poet

                And that was when you stole her heart. 🌹

                • Goldfinch60

                  When we stole each other's hearts AP, thank you.

                  Andy

                  • Accidental Poet

                    aah, yes. And you're very welcome. 🌹🌹

                  • arqios

                    Best response ever! That hand move declaration brought it all together.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      IT really did CB, thank you.

                      Andy

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      A wonderful ;memory of meeting your true love and one you will never forget ---- thank you for sharing it Andy my friend.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        So true and so kind Fay, thank you.

                        Andy

                      • Jerry Reynolds

                        Made my day, Andy.

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Much appreciated Jerry, thank you.

                          Andy

                        • MendedFences27

                          A sweet remembrance, Andy. What kind of coffee was that? Do they sell it in the States?
                          This poem was short and to the point. Plainly spoken and straight from the heart. Loved it.- Phil A

                          • Goldfinch60

                            It was Colombian Coffee and they probably sell it in the States.

                            Thank you for your kind words Phil.

                            Andy

                          • Rocky Lagou

                            This is splendidly crafted dear poet. Such a sweet and loving piece.

                            • Goldfinch60

                              Thank you Rocky, much appreciated.

                              Andy



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