On sea on land in the air. It’s like a continuum , a rainbow if not exactly a dream ( and it might be) is at least a stand in gif one type, or a metaphor for all types, or the grandest of all?, the ultimate promise of all we could ask and at it end we look to the realms where a more humble wish lives?
Anyway, I liked it. You are too cool and that is true very often. Dig!!! Miles Davis also gets that same review. Hallowed ground.
But ( although I disagreed) even Miles got that review from Stanley Crouch that blasted Bitches Brew with acerbic commentary , of course , the little known musicians so viscerally attacked by the reknown critic turned into the list of Who’Who in jazz forthe next 30years. It’s and interesting read of a gigantic miss and a captivating list of then mostly unknown artists. I believe it’s an easy find w a google search.
I don;t quite get the hang of it. I followed the rainbow to its end, then fell off the edge of the world. Aiiieeeeee! Do ya hear me falling off?! heehee.
What's that? You wish a black hole would swallow me up?
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On sea on land in the air. It’s like a continuum , a rainbow if not exactly a dream ( and it might be) is at least a stand in gif one type, or a metaphor for all types, or the grandest of all?, the ultimate promise of all we could ask and at it end we look to the realms where a more humble wish lives?
Anyway, I liked it. You are too cool and that is true very often. Dig!!! Miles Davis also gets that same review. Hallowed ground.
Cor blimey guv'nor what an accolade to pin on a fella .. more than muchly appreciated good sir .. much more than muchly .. Neville
But ( although I disagreed) even Miles got that review from Stanley Crouch that blasted Bitches Brew with acerbic commentary , of course , the little known musicians so viscerally attacked by the reknown critic turned into the list of Who’Who in jazz forthe next 30years. It’s and interesting read of a gigantic miss and a captivating list of then mostly unknown artists. I believe it’s an easy find w a google search.
Such true words Neville.
Andy
thanks Andy, now I can tell everyone a little bird told me .. 🙂
Your title and poem here have inspired me for my next poem 'All Bad Things' subtitled 'Life with KP' (of course). lol.
Why did I know you would say something like that 🐭
Well, it was all I could think of on the theme 'All Bad Things'. heehee.
I don;t quite get the hang of it. I followed the rainbow to its end, then fell off the edge of the world. Aiiieeeeee! Do ya hear me falling off?! heehee.
What's that? You wish a black hole would swallow me up?
Neville,
Whether influenced by the Bible or Alexander Pope, this is a good one.
…”hope
itself, shall always spring eternal ..”
Thank you for brightening my Sunday. ☀️
Laura🌻
I am near blinded by the light you have thrown upon this page my friend .. bless you and for eternity 🌻
Good to all that good may bring goodness birthing like Spring eternally.
............................... indeed sir cheers 🙂
Amen!
may these words, ever
ring true, dear Poet supreme
Beautiful!
Thank you hardly seems adequate .. I feel like I have just won an award .. Neville
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