That Shakespearean touch redeems Brevity Is the Soul of Wit but I hover mostly under Twain’s exacting retort
“If I had more time I would write a shorter letter”
Once again s pleasured Requite is mine as your energetic energy stimulates connection. Hope the best is yours as you Conquer , my friend.
perhaps i am reading too far into this- but the poem could go two very different directions. you found a beautiful flower and became quite taken with it- or fleur can mean a blossom. and picking it ending a life before it truly began. the duality of poetry at its finest. is it beautiful or sorrowful? either way it is a fantastic write.
Brilliant!
(nature's beauty, cut short
by cruelty of life's poetry
or a heart, pricked by thorns
yet gentle as rose petals
poetic form as a caging
of reality's artistic chaos
syllables, handcuffed
so our creativity may soar
...free)
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That Shakespearean touch redeems Brevity Is the Soul of Wit but I hover mostly under Twain’s exacting retort
“If I had more time I would write a shorter letter”
Once again s pleasured Requite is mine as your energetic energy stimulates connection. Hope the best is yours as you Conquer , my friend.
................... how verily kind of thee sir .. cheers .. 🍷Neville
Good write N.
Bit of French there - but not as in 'pardon my french!' lol.
................................................ Oui Mr. O merci 🙂
perhaps i am reading too far into this- but the poem could go two very different directions. you found a beautiful flower and became quite taken with it- or fleur can mean a blossom. and picking it ending a life before it truly began. the duality of poetry at its finest. is it beautiful or sorrowful? either way it is a fantastic write.
thank you so much for indulging me Joan, your visits are always more than welcome and very muchly appreciated .. Bless you & have a super Sunday 🙂
I am sure that that flower brought joy to your world Neville.
Andy
You are so write sir Andy 🌸
Brilliant!
(nature's beauty, cut short
by cruelty of life's poetry
or a heart, pricked by thorns
yet gentle as rose petals
poetic form as a caging
of reality's artistic chaos
syllables, handcuffed
so our creativity may soar
...free)
Cheers brother M .. I had no doubt you would get this little scribble ..
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