My Lover Senryu.

Goldfinch60



She is there for me,

My so beautiful lady,

The love of my life.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 4th, 2023 01:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: Our love gets stronger every moment of our lives.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 12
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Comments10

  • Neville


    you are both very lucky and I am sure you each deserve to be ..

    • Goldfinch60

      We certainly are Neville. Thank you.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A fine write Gold.

    • Teddy.15

      Woohoo so very romantic dear Andy, I adore senryu and this is gorgeous. So very happy for you and Mary ❤️🤗

      • Goldfinch60

        Much appreciated Tdeey, thank you.

        Andy

      • sorenbarrett

        A beautiful tribute to one that you love.

        • Goldfinch60

          Most kind soren, thank you.

          Andy

        • Christina8

          A fine and beautiful write Andy!!

          • Goldfinch60

            Much appreciated Christina, thank you.

            Andy

          • Bobby O

            I got nothing. You’ve proven that three lines qualifies. I’m not brave enough to go fir two. In your honor I listened to Miles and his version of Bye Bye Blackbirdthat rthymbgets set by the Brushes and the 88’s and smile builds tension by seemingly waiting too long but it was a nick in time and sets a great example of how Simple can be perfect-
            bop. bop bop. bop badopba
            Freaking Sublime.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Bobby O. Keep listening to Miles.

              A band we often see and think are fantastic is called 'Down for the Count' here is a sample of them:

              https://youtu.be/WNiVdfbaP8w

              Andy

              • Bobby O

                Out of respect I gave it a try. I’m mire if a Quartet Quintet improvisation interplay w spontaneous reaction to that just crested bar.
                Not much for Suppet Club

              • LIZ

                Beautiful!!!!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Liz, much appreciated.

                  Andy

                • Bella Shepard

                  Beautiful words, beautiful song, beautiful love. God bless you both Andy, what a beautiful life you both share.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Most kind Bella, thank you.

                    Andy

                  • MendedFences27

                    Wonderful. Bless you both. - Phil A.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you Phil, much appreciated.

                      Andy

                    • Jerry Reynolds

                      You have a romantic soul. Andy.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        I think I always have Jerry, thank you.

                        Andy



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