Pinocchio, deep in thought

Teddy.15

 

when I tell lies

wouldn’t it have been

so much more fun

if something else was to grow

rather than my nose?

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 29th, 2023 03:02
  • Comment from author about the poem: Over 18's 🀣 happy saturday to all.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 25
  • User favorite of this poem: Bella Shepard.
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Comments11

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Too much lying isn’t good lol it probably doesn’t help us either . Guess we use to question our own actions /behaviour ms sometimes

    Happy Saturday to you too ))

    • Teddy.15

      thank you dearest Rose. πŸ’–

    • orchidee

      An X-rated Pinocchio film. Swoon! lol.
      But of course you mean, his little finger, for example. heehee.

      • Teddy.15

        Oh MR O I'm as innocent as the day is long! LoL 🀣

        • orchidee

          Erm, some guys are never gonna stop lying then! Made myself swoon now! Woof, not now, says Fido. lol

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        • peto

          Tell the right lie and something else would grow
          Cheers for the laugh

          • Teddy.15

            Apparently any lie lol

            nice to see you dear peto. πŸ’–πŸ€£

          • LIZ

            🀣🀣🀣🀣 thank you for the laugh! Happy Saturday! ❀️

            • Teddy.15

              LOL thank you dearest Liz, see I'm not always a prude "red face she says it!" LOL πŸ’–πŸ€£

            • LIZ

              LOL I like this side of you!!! πŸ˜‰

              • Teddy.15

                Ah my satire muse lol you are very cruel Liz ❀️. lol

              • Bella Shepard

                Such an adorable picture, with just a hit of double entendre? It was more than a chuckle, would have been a "spit take" had my coffee been near by. Dear Teddy this is a gem, as are you.

                • Teddy.15

                  LoL absolutely love this review, you know the network will be gossiping about the fave dear Bella, you have such a wonderful heart πŸ’“ thank you dear friend.

                  • Bella Shepard

                    Correction, I meant to say hint, not hit, . I find myself doing that a lot these days. I'd say let them gossip, they just wish they's written it.

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                  • Neville



                    its not hard to feel where you are coming from mistress T ❀️

                    • Teddy.15

                      Maybe 20 years ago Mr Neville lol ❀️

                    • Goldfinch60

                      I never lie so nothing grows. LOL

                      Andy

                      • Teddy.15

                        LOL don't lie Andy, LoL πŸ€£πŸ’–πŸ€£

                      • Doggerel Dave

                        Truth to tell, you sat on Pinocchio's face (by accident.......)🀣

                        • Teddy.15

                          Oh Dave. LOL mind reader you! 🀣

                        • L. B. Mek

                          ha! hmmm
                          pffft, only you lady's would find this funny
                          ... what?! of course I was talking about height
                          ..'too'..
                          ahem!
                          'and dats all I gotsa a say bout daaat'
                          (thanks for the chuckles)

                          • Teddy.15

                            LOL you should see the reviews from the gentleman lol ah Mek, you are a barrel of laughs too. It's good to chuckle even when the main character is Pinocchio πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

                          • Bobby O

                            I don’t get it?

                            • Teddy.15

                              Hello dearest Bobby, Well maybe his boy organ would grow instead of his nose. It's satire. πŸ’–

                              • Bobby O

                                I was joshin’. Sorry. Nuance gets lost in these little tiny boxes we write in.

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