A Slice of Sky
Pastel
amethyst yellow
skies ..
Filled to overflow
with the
silhouettes
of gold eyed birds
in flight ..
I must make notes ..
For surely,
winter is only just
around,
the very next corner ..
- Author: Neville ( Offline)
- Published: August 24th, 2023 01:44
- Category: Unclassified
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- Users favorite of this poem: Bella Shepard
Comments9
Good write N,
We not started Autumn yet! lol.
This gives me a cue for a Christmas carol - in August! heehee.
Goldfinch/Andy will shoot me, for not waiting until December. 😁
Hope so .. cheers 👍
Not for me it ain't...Summer is on its way....
The prompt to make notes before this season presents itself, seems a reasonable proposition (thanks for that), if I can find an incombustible medium...
thanks for that, you wont need to borrow my space blanket then .. 👍🐧👍
This is so beautiful! I can see all the pastel colors. I have an Amethys stone. It's violet/purple. AND, I read "a slice"....and I said, OF CAKE. Then, your first word is "pastel", which is cake in Spanish. I guess I need to go get me a piece of cake!! Loved it!!
thanks LIZ 💜
Oh, no reminders of winter please! LOL Our winters are so harsh. Beautiful description of the sky, I really enjoyed this piece!
Thanks C ..
A winter of discontent?
I liked as I do all, the poem
thank you so very bloomin much sir .. N
Exquisite imagery, color evokes such warm feelings, "Silhouttes of gold eyed birds" a sense of peace. Had to take a breath, and just sigh in contentment. Thank you!
PC playing up since my return .. but want you to know that I am very grateful to you Bella .. Many thanks my friend .. Neville
indeed, my wise friend
we must cherish
that gifted nature aesthetic
in our now of verdant sublime
and rainbow winged skies...
as far too soon
it will be grey, brooding clouds
once again..
still variety, does add to flavour
in life
Bless you brother Mek .. tis good to have you back my friend .. Neville
But Autumn, my favourite time of the year, comes first.
Andy
Enjoy yourself up t'north.
thank you Andy ..
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