Our Issue In Life.

Goldfinch60



Well the day came

As it does every week,

Off we go shopping,

Shopping to feed ourselves,

Feed ourselves for the week.

Around the store we go,

Get all that we need,

No problem in that.

But!

But then we come to that place!

That place where the cream cakes,

The cream cakes reside.

We know we should rush passed

But we don’t,

We slow down.

This is the only issue,

Only issue we have

We have in our lives.

We know we should not,

Should not buy cream cakes

But we get pulled towards them

And we buy them,

And as we do we say,

We say we will not buy them,

Not buy them next week,

But we know that pigs may fly

Before we do not buy them,

Do not buy cream cakes every week.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 10th, 2023 01:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: We just cannot walk passed the cream cakes. LOL
  • Category: Special occasion
  • Views: 11
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  • LIZ

    This is hilarious, and true! For me it's chocolate cake!!! Every weekend!!! So fun!!!! 😆

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you LIZ, we all have those weaknesses with food.

      Andy

    • Neville



      Bloomin glad I'm not the only one 😇

      • Goldfinch60

        So very true Neville.

        Andy

      • orchidee

        Oh lol, good write Gold.
        I don;t fancy some foods if it's very hot weather.

        • Goldfinch60

          What about the pork pies!

          Andy

          • orchidee

            Yes lol - but not fry ups!

          • sorenbarrett

            So many things in life that we know we would be getter off without but temptation seems stronger than common sense. Small pleasures despite their harm are what give spice to life. So true Andy

            • Goldfinch60

              So true soren, those small pleasures are so important in our lives.

              Andy

            • Bobby O

              My bane resides in the chocolate covered Boston Crème. It’s got this perfect entry too ….

              • Goldfinch60

                We all have them Bobby but as long as we are careful and do not overindulge all will be well.

                Andy

              • David Wakeling

                Oh this is so true .The temptation every day.Mine is chocolate biscuits.But hey thats life

                • Goldfinch60

                  So true David, enjoy your biscuits.

                  Andy



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