Clear

peto

Bag that matches her heels 

Low cut top that reveals 

Just enough to add class to her style 

Make up lightly applied 

In the mirror she sighed 

As she hadn't been out in a while 

Had it all in her hand 

Queen of fairytale land 

When prince charming rode in for the kill 

Swept straight off both her feet 

Lands amongst the elite 

Seeking even a momentary thrill 

Oasis free of charge 

Or a costly mirage 

Shiney trinkets and baubles stone cold

In a flash he was gone 

From the Ritz to the pawn 

Looked upon as the crease in the fold 

One message heaven sent 

From the one who was meant

To share every emotion and fear 

If it isn't too late 

Readjust twists of fate 

When the heart sees it all becomes clear 

  • Author: peto (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 10th, 2023 06:50
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • LIZ

    Doesn't seem clear at times. But I'm grabbing my bag and heels!!! Yes, they match!!! Ayyyyyy this is just incredible!!! "If it isn't too late Readjust twists of fate"- Now I'm putting on my crown!! Let's go!!! ❤️

    • peto

      Ah
      Double trouble
      Thank you very much LIZ
      Supportive humourous and uplifting
      Much appreciated

      Thank you Maxine
      Truly appreciate such a kind comment

      Pleasure to see you both here
      Extremely grateful

      • LIZ

        😉 you better be ready!!!!

        • peto

          Born ready
          If you get a spare minute
          Go to candlewitch you tube version
          Make sure YOU ARE ready

          • peto

            Lol wtf have I done

            • LIZ

              Ohhhhh too late!!!! Been there done that! See now YOU'RE the one in trouble!!! Maxine just gave the GO!!!!!!! Candlewitch?

              • peto

                If you're looking for trouble
                You've come to the right place
                If this is trouble
                Why have I been avoiding it all this time

                Something I posted a while back (candlewitch)

                • LIZ

                  I knew there was a reason I liked you!! 😵😵😵😵😵 It's fabulous!!

                  • peto

                    Took a while to drag that out of you lol
                    It's mutual
                    Or you've been casting spells my way
                    Thank you

                    • LIZ

                      😉😉😉😉

                      • peto

                        Only one way to find out

                        • LIZ

                          Oh boyyyyy!!!!

                          • LIZ

                            🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

                            • peto

                              You are the starter Maxine
                              I'm under orders already

                              What you laughing at LIZ
                              You stirring that big pot of yours again lol

                              • peto

                                Your holding the pistol
                                You know how to use it??

                                • peto

                                  Ah ha
                                  So its you who can\'t handle it

                                  • peto

                                    Already loaded
                                    You simply have to cock it and pull it
                                    For desired explosion

                                    • LIZ

                                      I'm just stirring the cauldron at the moment! It's rising!! Ayyyyy 🧙‍♀️ 🪄 ✨️

                                      • peto

                                        You sure you have all the ingredients required

                                        • LIZ

                                          Now I pull the trigger, and you can't escape. There's no doubting here; you're the one to blame! So tell me, Peto, did I shoot you deep? Did Maxine's suggestions make your aiming weak? I'm unleashing rhythm, as you bleed the words, show me what you got, and I'll give you more!!

                                          • peto

                                            There's certainly no way
                                            I'm missing my shot
                                            One with a pistol
                                            One with a pot
                                            Maxine is squeezing
                                            LIZ brought to boil
                                            Such a dilemma
                                            How to stay loyal

                                            • LIZ

                                              Oh but that's the beauty, don't you see? The potion's done, I got your drink. She can hold the pistol while we make you scream! 💫 We can intertwine, if that's what you seek.

                                              • peto

                                                I'd drink from your potion
                                                Fall under the spell
                                                Maxine on the pistol
                                                She handles so well
                                                As for the screaming
                                                We'll share that around
                                                If we're intertwining
                                                I'd feel duty bound

                                                • LIZ

                                                  There you go! This is your feast! Taste it, lick it, as you please! Wherever your desires lead, it's all for you, go ahead, dig in!

                                                  • peto

                                                    No time like the present
                                                    But feast don't just snack
                                                    Take whatever you want
                                                    Throw what's left on the rack
                                                    Watch as my sweet surrender
                                                    Eternally bows
                                                    As I take as much in
                                                    As such beauty allows

                                                    • LIZ

                                                      Well, I must admit; you can keep it up, and so can Maxine. This poetic dancing, is my favorite theme, and so I must bow; I have been.....released!

                                                      • peto

                                                        Wow
                                                        Show stopper
                                                        That was magical
                                                        Thank you ladies
                                                        For making my day week month year life

                                                        • LIZ

                                                          MAGIC!! I needed this!!!! Thank you both!!! Now I need a shower and a nap!! 💦

                                                        • Bobby O

                                                          Ritz to the Pawn
                                                          Crease in the fold
                                                          Reading the phrasing you choose never gets old

                                                          • peto

                                                            Nor does reading your inspiring comments Bobby
                                                            Top man
                                                            Appreciate you being here very much

                                                            • Bobby O

                                                              And I tip this snifter of Gran Marnier in your honor

                                                            • Introverted Sage

                                                              This is magical!
                                                              'When the heart sees it all becomes clear'
                                                              It truly does!
                                                              Great write!

                                                              • peto

                                                                Thank you very much sage
                                                                Nice to hear it was enjoyed
                                                                Truly appreciate the visit



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