Once more I walked by it,
Walked by it with my lover by my side,
We walked along My River.
Its clear green water like a mirror
With ripples flowing passed,
Such a beautiful site,
My River flowing freely,
Flowing freely in my life
Showing me the way to go,
Being so much better
With my lover with me.
We will travel along My River
Until that time when our Spirits
Rise above the water
And flow together into eternity
Where we will meet the other two,
The other two that were in our lives,
And the four of us will go on,
Go on for eternity together.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 15th, 2023 01:23
- Comment from author about the poem: Written for Mary, Joyce and Dave, we will all be together one day.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 11
- User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments5
I liked every line of this poem
Thank you Serhat, much appreciated.
Andy
A fine write Gold.
Thank you Orchi.
That is a cathartic outlook that serves the heart and soul. Very wise Mr Finch
Most kind Bobby, thank you.
Andy
The most Beautiful testimony
to enduring Love, i will ever
Read
What a poet you are my friend
Your very life is a Poetry
few can hope to aspire towards
!Brilliant!
(and I choose to believe for you
all four of you!
stay blessed dear hopeful Poet)
I read and humbly, learn
Such very humbling words Mek, thank you so much.
Andy
Yes you will Andy,
Joyce and Dave love you and Mary so much they led your hearts together to live a life of love and happiness
They didn't want you two to suffer brokenhearts any longer
Beautiful piece my dear friend,
Give Mary my best
Love u guys
Yes I am sure you are right Melissa, thank you so much.
Andy
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