Four In Eternity.

Goldfinch60



Once more I walked by it,

Walked by it with my lover by my side,

We walked along My River.

Its clear green water like a mirror

With ripples flowing passed,

Such a beautiful site,

My River flowing freely,

Flowing freely in my life

Showing me the way to go,

Being so  much better

With my lover with me.

We will travel along My River

Until that time when our Spirits

Rise above the water

And flow together into eternity

Where we will meet the other two,

The other two that were in our lives,

And the four of us will go on,

Go on for eternity together.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 15th, 2023 01:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: Written for Mary, Joyce and Dave, we will all be together one day.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 11
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • Serhat Doğan

    I liked every line of this poem

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Serhat, much appreciated.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A fine write Gold.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Orchi.

      • Bobby O

        That is a cathartic outlook that serves the heart and soul. Very wise Mr Finch

        • Goldfinch60

          Most kind Bobby, thank you.

          Andy

        • L. B. Mek

          The most Beautiful testimony
          to enduring Love, i will ever
          Read
          What a poet you are my friend
          Your very life is a Poetry
          few can hope to aspire towards
          !Brilliant!
          (and I choose to believe for you
          all four of you!
          stay blessed dear hopeful Poet)
          I read and humbly, learn

          • Goldfinch60

            Such very humbling words Mek, thank you so much.

            Andy

          • BlessedbyGod

            Yes you will Andy,
            Joyce and Dave love you and Mary so much they led your hearts together to live a life of love and happiness
            They didn't want you two to suffer brokenhearts any longer

            Beautiful piece my dear friend,
            Give Mary my best
            Love u guys

            • Goldfinch60

              Yes I am sure you are right Melissa, thank you so much.

              Andy



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