Too Many Maybe’s


Too Many Maybe’s


his life seemed

so full

   of maybe’s ..


was barely

enough room

for a

   single perhaps ..






  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 19th, 2023 01:36
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 17
  • Users favorite of this poem: LIZ, L. B. Mek.


  • Teddy.15

    Perhaps in fact I am sure this is Beautiful. ❤️

    • Neville

      .................................... how incredibly super my very dearest of T's ❤️

    • orchidee

      Maybe, perhaps, possibly, not sure, could be, hmm, bit doubtful, can't be certain, etc, blah, blah, that this is a good write N. Enough waffling from me!

      • Neville

        thank you kindly for your participation in this little exercise Mr. Orchidee

      • Bobby O

        Like he could carry all that indecision but he had no chance to haul it.

        • Neville

          I think you just blew a smile back onto my face .. cheers Bobby 😎👍

        • LIZ

          Perhaps.....the answer has always been right in front of your eyes!! 💜

          • Neville

            what like my nose you mean .. 💜

            • LIZ

              🤣🤣🤣🤣 NEVILLE!!!!!!!!! 💜

            • Doggerel Dave

              Wot's this - a confessional?
              You laying on a couch while another trickcyclist listens intently (or however youse do it........)
              Worth a ponder, though.....

              • Neville

                Yeah, maybe ................... perhaps and thanks for pondering 👍

              • Christina8

                This is a cute little shortie. Perhaps I like it a lot!

                • Neville

                  who don't like a shortie .. around here we call em a quickie .. thanks C .. N

                • Maxine Smith

                  I wonder how many perhaps you will get ….

                  Perhaps many more, perhaps because it’s a definite gem.

                  • Neville

                    Thanks M .. N

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Maybe that perhaps will be with you soon Neville.


                    • Neville

                      Cheers Andy ............. 👍

                    • L. B. Mek

                      I like perhaps over maybe
                      one foot out of the door
                      if they ask me to come in
                      i can cut my leg off
                      save some of me from the ensuing
                      I am weary of full tables
                      and laughter full smiles
                      hunger scenes seem more natural
                      less questions needed
                      like, who died to gift us this
                      restaurant silver
                      why that waiter is limping
                      one legged like me
                      maybe, it's those
                      with perhaps holes of self
                      who can feel life's
                      gust of wind blades...
                      I'm with you Hyung..
                      save your maybe's
                      I'll stay by the gutter of perhaps
                      save myself a few body blows...

                      • Neville

                        wise choice, but then who am I to dictate which side of the gutter you choose .. you know I won't be too far away .. Neville

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