Accumulations
He, being a poet
and a collector of new words,
old stamps and gold coins ..
Just as she,
being adorable, collects new lovers,
bad losers and fools ..
While together,
they collected moments,
made love and changed history ..
Accumulations
He, being a poet
and a collector of new words,
old stamps and gold coins ..
Just as she,
being adorable, collects new lovers,
bad losers and fools ..
While together,
they collected moments,
made love and changed history ..
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I don't wanna bring any more trouts into the world with KP - the last line of your poem! 😁
I wouldn't worry about babies Mr. O .. at this rate you are gonna be fry'ed 🐟🐟🐟🐠🐧
LOL I read this a few times and each time it got more and more fabulous although she sounds like a man eater i do love the last stanza, nothing wrong with changing history makes it all a bit more exciting. I had a chuckle darling Nev. ❤️
You are more than just kind Teddy .. You are amazingly kind .. and I thank you for it .. Neville ❤️
Neville, Neville, Neville!! UFFFFF! Changing the narrative.....after everything....after the pile of....experiences...all of it...it's used to create...that special One! 💜
Is that a yes, or a no then .. but nevatheless and regardless, I hereby thank you BIGLY 💜
🫢🤫💜
this is the glue, that never makes it movie scenes
or poetry's verse
the ugly in the bonds that carry us
from disaster to
our dreamed Perhaps of a better
a blink and history is redrafted
that's all it takes
may that never change...
(Brilliant! Hyung
loved every minute of reading
your poems this week)
thank you!
and back at you my friend .. many thank you's indeed .. Neville
History…that’s wot they woz…they’ve been well analyzed above, so who am I to intervene?
Now provided… no, listen Neville – provided you can absolutely guarantee that this pair of incompatible sillies are history, then I can depart, knowing I’ve done the best I can and so on, etc…….
PS: you are getting a little slow off the starting blocks here. What's going on?
both my knee and my pen are playing up .. sorry ..
Wow, this is a complete detailed story in very few verses. Wonderfully clear and quite imaginative (though more than likely true). Very well done!
thank you Michael .. once or twice I have written about serial killers .. it don't make me one tho .. it's the imagination you see, sometimes it just gets the better of me .. Neville
Twas nice. I was rooting and rewarded when yiu broke that chain of losers and it faded a meaning beyond the words
Very nice Mr. Neville.
am so glad you came by and took advantage of the view my friend .. thank you .. Neville
Every moment we change history when together Neville.
Andy
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I've met a few. Fantastic work.
Cheers kind sir .. Neville 😎👍
Love this, you bring it full circle.
Now ain’t that just perfect .. cheers .. Neville
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