Accumulations

Neville

Accumulations

 

He, being a poet

and a collector of new words,

old stamps and gold coins ..

 

Just as she,

being adorable, collects new lovers,

bad losers and fools ..

 

While together,

they collected moments,

made love and changed history ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 22nd, 2023 02:00
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 16
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, LIZ, L. B. Mek
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  • orchidee

    I don't wanna bring any more trouts into the world with KP - the last line of your poem! 😁

    • Neville



      I wouldn't worry about babies Mr. O .. at this rate you are gonna be fry'ed 🐟🐟🐟🐠🐧

    • Teddy.15

      LOL I read this a few times and each time it got more and more fabulous although she sounds like a man eater i do love the last stanza, nothing wrong with changing history makes it all a bit more exciting. I had a chuckle darling Nev. ❤️

      • Neville



        You are more than just kind Teddy .. You are amazingly kind .. and I thank you for it .. Neville ❤️

      • LIZ

        Neville, Neville, Neville!! UFFFFF! Changing the narrative.....after everything....after the pile of....experiences...all of it...it's used to create...that special One! 💜

        • Neville



          Is that a yes, or a no then .. but nevatheless and regardless, I hereby thank you BIGLY 💜

          • LIZ

            🫢🤫💜

          • L. B. Mek

            this is the glue, that never makes it movie scenes
            or poetry's verse
            the ugly in the bonds that carry us
            from disaster to
            our dreamed Perhaps of a better
            a blink and history is redrafted
            that's all it takes
            may that never change...
            (Brilliant! Hyung
            loved every minute of reading
            your poems this week)
            thank you!

            • Neville



              and back at you my friend .. many thank you's indeed .. Neville

            • Doggerel Dave

              History…that’s wot they woz…they’ve been well analyzed above, so who am I to intervene?
              Now provided… no, listen Neville – provided you can absolutely guarantee that this pair of incompatible sillies are history, then I can depart, knowing I’ve done the best I can and so on, etc…….
              PS: you are getting a little slow off the starting blocks here. What's going on?

              • Neville



                both my knee and my pen are playing up .. sorry ..

              • Pop64

                Wow, this is a complete detailed story in very few verses. Wonderfully clear and quite imaginative (though more than likely true). Very well done!

                • Neville



                  thank you Michael .. once or twice I have written about serial killers .. it don't make me one tho .. it's the imagination you see, sometimes it just gets the better of me .. Neville

                • Bobby O

                  Twas nice. I was rooting and rewarded when yiu broke that chain of losers and it faded a meaning beyond the words
                  Very nice Mr. Neville.

                  • Neville



                    am so glad you came by and took advantage of the view my friend .. thank you .. Neville

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Every moment we change history when together Neville.

                    Andy

                    • Neville



                      ................................................. 👍

                    • Thomas W Case

                      I've met a few. Fantastic work.

                      • Neville


                        Cheers kind sir .. Neville 😎👍

                      • Thomas W Case

                        Love this, you bring it full circle.

                        • Neville


                          Now ain’t that just perfect .. cheers .. Neville



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