When My Heart Fell in Love

Neville

When My Heart Fell in Love

 

When my heart felt in love

all I could see

were roses and cardinals

and fresh laundered sheets ..

When my brain

was engaged, I could hear,

taste and smell

a desert, the ocean and sky ..

When my soul

was in synch with my spirit,

I just knew that I was free again ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 23rd, 2023 02:21
  • Comment from author about the poem: it is wot it is and it aint wot it aint .. 🤍
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 23
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, LIZ, Bella Shepard
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  • Doggerel Dave

    I'm leaving this one for those as do this kind of response best.............. they'll be along in a moment....

    • Doggerel Dave

      Told ya.... 😇!!!

      • Neville


        You are indeed a gentleman sir .. you old dog .. 👍

        • Doggerel Dave

          Woof woof - and they dun you proud...... Keep up the good work...........

        • Teddy.15

          LOL oh my dear Nev, your last lines make me hear the violin playing sweetly love can be a bitch for sure but if we can leave it knowing we at least did it with a certain amount of dignity then it's all going to be alright ❤️

          • Neville



            that's all write then cheers Teddy ❤️

          • LIZ

            "When my soul, was in synch with my spirit, I just knew that I was free again... AND 🎤 drop!!!! UFFFFF! It is what it is!! 💜

            • Neville



              ................................... a blatant mike drop UFFFF cheers LIZ 💜

            • orchidee

              Good write N. A lot of 'ufffing' here. I dunno wot it is, of course!

              • Neville



                thanks, but its nowt to even contemplate swooning about. N

              • Parisab

                Poem reveals that the love is the intersection of soul in synch with spirit. And that’s such a breakthrough!

                • Neville



                  Phew, that's a relief thank you Parisab .. Neville

                • Bella Shepard

                  The first blush of love does indeed dazzle the senses. The shine can wear off and back to reality. No harm, no foul? Truly an engaging write for the little gray cells my friend

                  • Neville



                    thanks a bunch my friend .. 💐x

                  • Goldfinch60

                    May that freedom be forever with you Neville.

                    Andy

                    • Neville



                      Many thanks Andy .. N

                    • Bobby O

                      Hmmmm. Heart. Brain. Soul. Spirit. I think padding the intangible to insure an available escape clause is pure brilliance.

                      • Neville



                        trying to cover all the bases does increase the chances of getting it write sir .. thanks for noticing 🙂

                      • L. B. Mek

                        'and fresh laundered sheets ..'
                        honeymoon phases be da best
                        the rest can just, wait
                        in the wise words of Quagmire
                        'giggidy, giggidy' heat
                        🍻😎😉

                        • Neville



                          ............................................. 😎👍



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