Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House

Neville

Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House

 

for some

peculiar reason,

there

appears to be

a stranger

in the house ..

and I’m pretty

darn sure

that it’s me ..

we just seem

to have

somehow,

conveniently

forgotten

that when we

were

together ..

we both lived,

in some kind of

symbolic harmony ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 24th, 2023 11:32
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Bella Shepard
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  • Teddy.15

    I'm guessing grand parents are visiting the beautiful babe today, my goodness sometimes life can be or feel so complicated, I've felt like a stranger many times being away from home, but actually in the end I'm home. ❤️

    • Neville



      funnily enough I did visit my little granddaughter today .. she has been irritable with the snuffles and my daughter was at her wits end .. thanks for stopping by Teddy ❤️

    • Bella Shepard

      For me, you put into words a feeling that comes over me more and more these days. I'm aging, life is changing, and sometimes I don't recognize the stranger that's here now. This poem is so touching in which ever context you choose to see it. Thank you for sharing!

      • Neville



        You really do have a good eye my friend .. thank you so very much .. All Good Things Neville

      • spilleronsheet

        This is a heartfelt poetry…it feels like issues of adulting for me…with time we forget to cherish the time with ourselves and ending as strangers with the voice inside…lovely poetry dear Neville….

        • Neville



          You are far too generous my friend, thank you .. Neville

        • Parisab

          I respect the mature words, love shifts its energy I presume…

          • Neville



            nothing stays the same does it P ... thank you for stopping by and saying hello .. neville

          • Bobby O

            Forever forgotten is different than forgotten rhythm which might suggest a soon repair with in exact procedure. One less or maybe One More black and tan could be a baseline start?

            • Neville



              your judge of character flaws is second to none my friend .. many thanks B .. N

              • Bobby O

                Flaw is your word. I believe Hemingway oft referred to his “avant- garde” persona.
                Let’s go w Dat!

              • Doggerel Dave

                "The end of the affair"?

                Subtle and neat. Though I read through twice before I realised that the first word last line was not 'symbiotic'.

                • Neville



                  I do appreciate all the trouble you went to in order to arrive at a pretty damn good deduction Dave ..

                • Goldfinch60

                  Such emotive words Neville.

                  Andy

                • L. B. Mek

                  seven days and a month early..
                  also, reduce the amount of mirrors
                  in the house..
                  also..... (don't place these thoughts in my head)
                  also.. Thank you! Hyung
                  for another great read
                  lol
                  (forgive me I'm in a playful mood)

                  • Neville



                    My absolute delight .. thanks brother Mek .. nowt to forgive 🙂



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