Much depended on the hand I was delt - not a good 'un, but I played it to the full....didn't fold unless left with little choice and there were moments when I could've made a better call but overall never went bust.
Got me contemplating, reminiscing again, Neville......
I love the title, it applies both personally and collectively to so many things. Much of life hangs on a wish, "if only". Your introspective nature truly shines through these days, and it's wonderful.
I so relate, cherished Poet
How many have inked their regrets
On those clouds of hope
Wishing their heart's may be heard
By those they miss the most..
(I really like the simple delivery
as the content and subject
Is already so heavy, your subtlety
At its refined best)
thank you! Hyung
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Isn't love complicated ❤️
........................................... Yep ❤️
A fine write - or a write fine N.
thanks Steven 👍
You never know.....wishes...do come true. Maybe not how we expected! But they do come true!! 💜
that's a nice thought LIZ thanks for it .. 💜
Much depended on the hand I was delt - not a good 'un, but I played it to the full....didn't fold unless left with little choice and there were moments when I could've made a better call but overall never went bust.
Got me contemplating, reminiscing again, Neville......
I agree and understand precisely .. and would be a liar if I said otherwise .. and whilst I may be a lot of things, I am proud of my integrity ..
Going to add "and whilst I......" to my confession above. Thanks.
A wonderful metaphor at many levels. Every once in a while such a metaphor comes to mind and this is one. Nicely done Neville
you got me .. hands up, I confess .. thank you so much soren .. Neville
I have wondered that same thing....I think "what might have been" is a thought on many peoples minds from time to time. Great write!
Thank you Christina8 I am sure that most do .. Neville
We are back to the "What if...." scenario once more Neville.
Andy
How cool is that .. Cheers GF60
The wish is such that our wonderment is true.
It can appear to happen that way .. Bless you sir O .. Neville
Nice
I love the title, it applies both personally and collectively to so many things. Much of life hangs on a wish, "if only". Your introspective nature truly shines through these days, and it's wonderful.
how very kind of you Bella and how very much appreciated you are too and truly .. Neville
I so relate, cherished Poet
How many have inked their regrets
On those clouds of hope
Wishing their heart's may be heard
By those they miss the most..
(I really like the simple delivery
as the content and subject
Is already so heavy, your subtlety
At its refined best)
thank you! Hyung
.. I am well n truly made up brother M .. N
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