So Much More Than A Madness

Neville

So Much More Than A Madness

 

Without antecedents

we have nothing,

but can still choose what

   we want us to be ..

I know how to starve,

to deny

   and to punish myself ..

But refuse

to eat rainbows or play

   silly leaving games ..

I just need to know

how many resurrections

we are each

   allowed these days ..

Without feeling

   something missing inside ..

I really need to be

famous you see, for the

remaining fifteen

   minutes, left of today ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 29th, 2023 03:20
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 14
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, L. B. Mek, LIZ
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  • Teddy.15

    Beautiful dear Nev, your reflection and pain is raw in this and I have to say your last lines are truly goosebump lines, because we all need to feel noticed at some point. ❤️

    • Neville



      what could be better than that .. thank you so bloomin much my friend .. Neville ❤️

    • orchidee

      A fine write N.
      I never knew it was 11.45pm now - eh?! 15 mins left.
      I was famous in my life for 15 mins (so far). KP was famous for all of her life except 15 seconds - so she says.

      • Neville



        there are certain types of May fly that are reputed to live for only around thirty seconds .. just imagine what they have to cram into their entire lifetime ..

        • orchidee

          Yes, they probably fly round the world 7,483 times in their 30 seconds!

          • Neville



            that sounds more like a May bee

            • orchidee

              Oh lol. You spent that extra second we had one year, or you still saving it up?!

            • L. B. Mek

              !!!BRILLIANT!!!
              'But refuse
              to eat rainbows or play
              silly leaving games ..'
              (I think our write's are in sync
              today
              that's always a cherished gift)
              what can I say Hyung
              I simply bow to your superior talent
              oh Supreme poet!
              humbly (I read and learn)

              • Neville



                You are brother Mek an absolute legend sir ..

              • Christina8

                This is really great and said with a rawness not often seen...At the end of your poem, I think we all need to be seen and noticed.....really great stuff!

                • Neville


                  thanks Christina .. much appreciated .. Neville

                • LIZ

                  Yes indeed! We want to be SEEN...without all the fake sh#$ in between!! 💜

                  • Neville



                    ................. absolutely .. thanks LIZ 💜

                  • Goldfinch60

                    We all have our fifteen minutes of fame Neville (or is that infamy).

                    Andy

                    • Neville



                      maybe but thanks anyway .. N



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