Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
Pray hush now
and listen
can you make out
the words
being muttered
into beards,
through teeth,
across tongues
and over gums
around the world ..
Well then,
be sure to note
each one
of these I choose
to share
with you today ..
Expressed,
handed down
and otherwise
conveyed, that is ..
Between one old
forbidden
lover and another ..
Now barely whispered ..
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Well I would hope that its "I love you" but then again I'm a romantic teddy lol ❤️
I think perhaps I'm getting boring in my old age ,, maybe .. but thanks for sticking with me tho T ❤️
What? Never boring may be it's me 🤣
Good write N,
I grew a moustache, so that KP would think she is kissing a dead caterpillar. Well, when I kiss her, not often, it's like kissing an old trout! lol.
how can one tell if a guineapig has got a moustache or whether it is an all over body stocking or something
Thanks N. lol. Has KP got a moustache too?!
Mmmmm "Between one old forbidden lover and another", naughty whispers?
"I can’t wait to have you”...for example? Am I close at all?? 💜
....................... Very 💜
Amen?
inspired whispers
concerto for a voice.
I'll take that as a yes then .. thank you Darkfragrance
I like where you are headed with this....so things like "more please" and other things I cannot utter here. A very good write if I do say so myself!
Why my oh' my .. thank you & kindly C ..
When love appeared I was surprised. But then I re thought , it’s typical of you to hold the important impact for that perfect moment. Abracadabra !!
Bless you Bobby O .. what an encouraging review you have left here .. Many thanks my friend .. Neville
Dig!
Intriguing words Neville, old lovers are never forgotten.
Andy
indeed they are not Andy .. cheers, Neville
Excellent work.
Way too kind but I am of course delighted and thank you regardless .. Neville
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