Barely Heard Through All The Whispers


Barely Heard Through All The Whispers


Pray hush now

and listen

can you make out

the words

being muttered

into beards,

through teeth,

across tongues

and over gums

around the world ..

Well then,

be sure to note

each one

of these I choose

to share

with you today ..


handed down

and otherwise

conveyed, that is ..

Between one old


lover and another ..

Now barely whispered ..


  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 3rd, 2023 00:11
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: LIZ.
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  • Teddy.15

    Well I would hope that its "I love you" but then again I'm a romantic teddy lol ❤️

    • Neville

      I think perhaps I'm getting boring in my old age ,, maybe .. but thanks for sticking with me tho T ❤️

      • Teddy.15

        What? Never boring may be it's me 🤣

      • orchidee

        Good write N,
        I grew a moustache, so that KP would think she is kissing a dead caterpillar. Well, when I kiss her, not often, it's like kissing an old trout! lol.

        • Neville

          how can one tell if a guineapig has got a moustache or whether it is an all over body stocking or something

          • orchidee

            Thanks N. lol. Has KP got a moustache too?!

          • LIZ

            Mmmmm "Between one old forbidden lover and another", naughty whispers?
            "I can’t wait to have you”...for example? Am I close at all?? 💜

            • Neville

              ....................... Very 💜

            • Teddy.15


            • Lorenz

              inspired whispers
              concerto for a voice.

              • Neville

                I'll take that as a yes then .. thank you Darkfragrance

              • Christina8

                I like where you are headed with things like "more please" and other things I cannot utter here. A very good write if I do say so myself!

                • Neville

                  Why my oh' my .. thank you & kindly C ..

                • Bobby O

                  When love appeared I was surprised. But then I re thought , it’s typical of you to hold the important impact for that perfect moment. Abracadabra !!

                  • Neville

                    Bless you Bobby O .. what an encouraging review you have left here .. Many thanks my friend .. Neville

                    • Bobby O


                    • Goldfinch60

                      Intriguing words Neville, old lovers are never forgotten.


                      • Neville

                        indeed they are not Andy .. cheers, Neville

                      • Thomas W Case

                        Excellent work.

                        • Neville

                          Way too kind but I am of course delighted and thank you regardless .. Neville

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