Barely Heard Through All The Whispers

Neville


Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍

Barely Heard Through All The Whispers

 

Pray hush now

and listen

can you make out

the words

being muttered

into beards,

through teeth,

across tongues

and over gums

around the world ..

Well then,

be sure to note

each one

of these I choose

to share

with you today ..

Expressed,

handed down

and otherwise

conveyed, that is ..

Between one old

forbidden

lover and another ..

Now barely whispered ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 3rd, 2023 00:11
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Teddy.15

    Well I would hope that its "I love you" but then again I'm a romantic teddy lol ❤️

    • Neville



      I think perhaps I'm getting boring in my old age ,, maybe .. but thanks for sticking with me tho T ❤️

      • Teddy.15

        What? Never boring may be it's me 🤣

      • orchidee

        Good write N,
        I grew a moustache, so that KP would think she is kissing a dead caterpillar. Well, when I kiss her, not often, it's like kissing an old trout! lol.

        • Neville


          how can one tell if a guineapig has got a moustache or whether it is an all over body stocking or something

          • orchidee

            Thanks N. lol. Has KP got a moustache too?!

          • LIZ

            Mmmmm "Between one old forbidden lover and another", naughty whispers?
            "I can’t wait to have you”...for example? Am I close at all?? 💜

            • Neville



              ....................... Very 💜

            • Teddy.15

              Amen?

            • Lorenz

              inspired whispers
              concerto for a voice.

              • Neville



                I'll take that as a yes then .. thank you Darkfragrance

              • Christina8

                I like where you are headed with this....so things like "more please" and other things I cannot utter here. A very good write if I do say so myself!

                • Neville


                  Why my oh' my .. thank you & kindly C ..

                • Bobby O

                  When love appeared I was surprised. But then I re thought , it’s typical of you to hold the important impact for that perfect moment. Abracadabra !!

                  • Neville


                    Bless you Bobby O .. what an encouraging review you have left here .. Many thanks my friend .. Neville

                    • Bobby O

                      Dig!

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Intriguing words Neville, old lovers are never forgotten.

                      Andy

                      • Neville



                        indeed they are not Andy .. cheers, Neville

                      • Thomas W Case

                        Excellent work.

                        • Neville


                          Way too kind but I am of course delighted and thank you regardless .. Neville



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