Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
To be honest,
the white room
seemed larger
than the average
gallery ..
Quite remarkably
white in fact ..
Indeed,
it contrasted
sharply
with the grey
and the
magnificently
boring
world outside ..
From where any
individual
might seek refuge
if they were
so inclined ..
Cold marble
and bleached oak
skirting
seemed to create
an illusion of both
space and purity ..
On this
occasion though,
a young man
and a woman,
both wet
and windswept
each sought shelter
independently
of each another
and the extreme
weather outside
the white room ..
No sooner had they
entered though,
they were
bathed in light
from each direction ..
Yet both ignored
the pulsing crystal,
set in a clasp of
some rare metal ..
And gazed instead
directly
at the white wall,
just off centre ..
He admiring
and she,
more curiously
regarding
the blood red stain
upon the white wall
of the white room ..
Despite
this particular
observation ..
Each was also
conscious of the other,
of the steam
that rose
from raincoats,
plus the tiny pools
of water,
that collected
on the mirrors
and the fact
that they were
strangers ..
Seemingly alone
together
in the white room ..
A fraction later,
without any
obvious movement,
or emotion
and unaccustomed
as they were
to feeling
comfortable ..
The couple were
compelled,
to change their
positions
in the white room ..
The young women
knelt,
then drew both her
knees together ..
Resting buttocks
upon
her heels just like
our Lady of the Alter ..
Then raised her eyes
in order
to accommodate
the young man,
who stood before her
arching backwards ..
His hands both clutching
breast and shoulders
beneath the lapels
of her raincoat
and eventually
collapsing
across the back
and the shoulders
of the kneeling woman ..
Then rising slowing
and still shaking
the young man
gazed down
at the now reclining
woman
and noticed how
her black skirt
had somehow parted
along the line
of some
invisible seam ..
Of how
the whites of thighs
were calling
and how they did
contrast
with the black sheen
of silk stocking top ..
And of course,
the white floor
of the white room ..
The young man
then proceeded
to further part
the torn black skirt ..
While the woman
probed and fingered
her secret garden ..
Moments later
the young man
grasped
the woman’s
frantic hand
and held it fast ..
And for the first time
their eyes met fully
as she pleaded
and he resisted,
both her wanting
and his temptation
to plunge himself
into her hunger ..
The couple then
were naked,
having discarded
all damp clothing,
in favour of more
intimate embrace ..
The woman gasped
and took
the young man
in both hands
to please both herself
and the stranger
within
the cool whiteness
of the white room ..
Then there was
no more teasing,
no cautious penetration ..
Fuck me echoed
round the white room
and the young man
obeyed precisely,
meeting the first
of her contractions
with an aftertaste
of watered honey ..
Sometime later,
a small explosion
shook the white room
and the young couple
both exhausted,
removed themselves
from one another ..
Then after allowing
a moment
to rest and regain
their composure ..
The young couple
hastily gathered
all their clothing
and dressed in silence ..
Though each was
tempted to ask
for an address
or telephone number ..
Both resisted
and then,
without further
glance or contact,
the strangers
made their way
toward the exit ..
Pausing only
to remove their
credit cards
from the slot beneath
the sleeping crystal,
in the centre
of the white room
Outside it was
still raining and so
the young woman
hopped on a bus
and wondered why
she had never
taken advantage
of the white room before ..
Elsewhere,
a young man lifted
his collar,
sucked hard upon
a cigarette and smiled ..
Knowing
there was still
a full half hour before
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
was scheduled to close
for the weekend ..
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Comments8
A fine write N.
I can't remember which one it was:
Was KP wet and windswept cos I left her outdoors in a storm?
OR did we arrive too late at the Rainbow Rooms, cos I put our watches back 3 hours on purpose?! heehee.
It's nutty adventures ya know. 😁
are you sure it wasn't some kind of physiological reaction to her being stimulated by your furry paws or something ... or someone else's 🦇🦇
lol.
An extraordinary piece here the imagery I hope never to see inside that white room. Fabulous Neville. A beautiful ending kudos on all the imagery. ❤️
and there was me thinking .. or was that hoping you might jump at the chance ❤️
Damn! This is a story, a compilation of a setting, cast, subject, finale, it had it all! Exciting? Yes, all built up to a remarkable climax and an ending that revealed the truth of the white room. Marvelous work!
How extraordinarily kind of you sir .. I thought perhaps folk might not read this in its entirety because of its bulk .. Neville
What a strange and magical room, where passions abound, and appetites quenched through the miracle of a credit card. A thrilling story, brilliant imagery, and as always, your incredible style.
Thanks a million Bella .. I am thrilled that you took both time and trouble to check in and see this dreadfully norty and rather lengthy scribble through to the end .. and I do mean that sincerely my friend .. Neville
It was my pleasure!
A fantasy of the highest order. An amazing tale of sexual fulfillment with an air of futuristic opulence. "Rainbow Rooms Incorporated," leaves much for the reader to ponder - What of all the other colors? - What are the rules? etc.
Loved the impersonal nature of the event. Loved the whole damn thing! - Phil A. -
Do you know what Phil, I am chuffed to bits mate and no kiddin .. Neville
So so si much here to capture without proper immersion dedicated and realistic interpretive skill so I humbly will admire and truly mean that it’s a piece that could be the whole syllabus for professorial to shed light to lessers inches by inch and still need extra time !!
That sounds much like a win win win .. neva could decline a menage et toi .. Cheers Bobby n truly 🙂
What a wonderful write Neville, I was hooked from the beginning.
Andy
Cheers Andy .. and there woz me thinking it might have been a bit too norty for ya .. You had obviously had a dubble helping of Trill before reading .. AGT's Neville
'to plunge himself
into her hunger ..'
(sadly..
.. our crude - cold humanity
is heading exactly
to that drought of emotion reality
in our soon to be
dystopian society
removed from a mirage community
let alone
that vulnerability of intimacy...)
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
'where we offer shallow, no mess
solutions
to your lifetime of debilitating scars'
visionary Brilliance dear Poet supreme
By the Time the majority
can relate to these lines
it will have already been
too late...
how monstrously deflating
to contemplate!
.. Amen brother M .. N
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