Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
Can you
picture me,
my bro
and a chainsaw ..
No,
well that’s
perfectly okay
in fact,
it’s just fine ..
But let’s
state,
here and now
for the record ..
Barbie
and indeed,
the prize
topiary are now
sadly both
well n truly, fucked ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: this was first scribbled down when I still had a sense of humour & when I thought the first cut was always the deepest
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LOL oh my dear Nev, you haven't lost your sense of humour my friend, it is well and truly stuck inside you. ❤️ ere I never liked Barbie either, chainsaw away LoL
Ken wants to kick my butt .. ❤️
Kenny has an extremely small mushroom lol
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I did smile at the finish and really like how equal and aligned it placed Topiary and Barbie. Other than you and the catalyst that mixes in your mind that logical equanimity would be left forever undiscovered.
Fido was OK until the last line, then he swooned! lol.
He probably snorted it a bit too hard ..
OH MY LORD! 😂😂😂😂😂 Neville!!! I just pictured barbie cut up in a lot of small pieces!! What a picture!! But ummmm...why did your bro have to get involved??? Although....nah never mind. LOL 💜💜💜
he came along for the ride 💜
Oh boy!!! 🫢🫢
Was this before or after the visit to your local. Either way a topiary of "Barbie" never seems a good idea. Maybe if you could salvage the important parts and cover the rest with "very cool pink clothing" it might just be passable.
Why would you even attempt such a zany venture? Oh well, it made for a very humorous poem. - Phil A.
P.S. - At first, I envisioned a disaster of the proportions in Frost's "Out, Out." thank God no one was injured. Or maybe it was just an episode of "Only Fools and Horses."
I had no idea Only Fools & Horses aired in the US .. its great isn't it .. cheers Phil .. N
Yes Barbie should be beheaded.
Andy
too late the deed is done .. N
sadly
no, first one's are tepid cuts
because we hadn't learnt to fall
deep,
yet
but hey, later we learn
that barbies just like ken's
are to be played with, only
and eventually
we find ourselves a real person
to hope with...
(so graphic!
i think there's a horror director
trapped inside you
waiting for the right timing....
do you have a brother?
forgive me for being a little jealous
that Hyung, is more than a word to me
lol)
an energetic write this one...
Halloween themed one could suggest..
but always depth, wise Poet
always something to peel back
and appreciate
with all your poems!
Thank you brother M with all my 🤍 Neville
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