And it rained!
It rained and rained.
When it stopped
We went for a walk,
A walk by My River.
The water was so high,
Over the path on one side,
But we could walk.
The water was running so fast,
The normal clear green
A muddy brown colour.
And as we walked
We saw the birds,
The swans and geese
Huddled on the grass,
The river too fast for them,
For them to swim.
But we walked,
Walked along the wonder,
The wonder of My River
Along which I had walked,
Walked so many times.
So many memories were there,
As I remembered,
Remembered so many wonders
That My River brought to me
Over so many years.
And here I was now
Walking by My River
With the wonder in my life,
The wonder that surprised us both,
When this love we have,
Have for each other
Became so strong and so wonderful.
So there we are now
The two of us,
Walking along Our River.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I love music of so many different types and when people ask me what my favourite is I reply "The piece I am listening to now" . I do have a favourite singer though, Kathleen Ferrier, and she is singing on this video.
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Comments6
A walk of grace and charm ❤️
So kind Teddy, thank you.
Andy
the walk of love .. lovely voice too
Thank you Neville, much appreciated.
Andy
Good write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
A flush is good for a river.
It certainly is 2781.
Andy
GF,
you paint a picture with delicate brush strokes slowly adding more colour, depth and vibrancy.
Well crafted.
M
So kind Ma5on, thank you.
Andy
Took me back!
I hope it took you back to a fine place Jon, thank you.
Andy
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