I REMEMBER

LIZ


Notice of absence from LIZ
PEACE, LOVE, LIGHT!


I haven't forgotten, it's still heavy now. The tears, the anxiety, the anger, the frowns. 

 

Yes, I remember, how you bailed me out. Your words, your touch, each soothing sound. 

 

I haven't forgotten when I was left out. Everyone ran, but YOU stayed around!

 

Oh I remember, and I have no doubt; it's your love and presence, I can't live without!!

 

 

 

  • Author: LKA (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 17th, 2023 02:55
  • Comment from author about the poem: HE has always been faithful! I remember!!!
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 31
  • Users favorite of this poem: GenXer Shamrocker ☘️, Accidental Poet, Teddy.15
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  • Bobby O

    Everyone ran but you stayed around. That’s a forever attachment and I believe however deep the appreciation is from the start , it will grow as the heroic nature of being shown that loyalty stands more and more apart from those that didn’t stay and try to pass off insufficient reason as they still grasp for your friendship. They continue to be shallow and never realize you know and that defines and the choice of staying rises high and rinds deep Everest next to the canyon. And their tied and the same snd you have a hero

    • LIZ

      Wow Bobby! You definitely grasped what I was trying to say!! I am grateful!! I appreciate this so much!! 💫💫💫💫

      • Bobby O

        Run silent run deep and pause at your pace w pride Pretty Girl

      • Neville



        I have no doubt you refer to that maybe once in a lifetime unmistakable, unrequited unconditional UFFFF kinda love .. the kind that despite its inevitable niggles and may be a minor flaw here n there make it perfect ... Neville 💜

      • LIZ

        NEVILLE!!! Yes, that "once in a lifetime unmistakable, unrequited unconditional kinda love" UFFFFFF indeed!!! Thank YOU!!!! 💜💜💜💜💜💜

      • LIZ

        Ayyyyyyy hi Maxine!!!! You are so sweet!!! Thank you so much!!! You know I always appreciate your comments!! 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
        Sending you a big hug!!!

      • orchidee

        Yep, I always stayed around! lol.
        And now my poem: I remember when it was deep, very deep....
        Oops, I dozed off; forgot the rest of the poem. heehee. Maybe it's best I did. What was deep? EWe'll never know! 😁

        • LIZ

          I think this is the deepest you've ever been LOL 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

          • orchidee

            Nothing to deep for me now - I dived in at the shallow end! lol.

          • Accidental Poet

            In life, everyone has a choice to make. But when you stand by family and others you love, that's the best and right choice to make. Great Write Liz. 😉

          • Thomas W Case

            Truly beautiful.

            • LIZ

              Thank you!!!

            • Goldfinch60

              That love will always be there for you LIZ.

              Andy

              • LIZ

                Thank you so much Andy!!!! 💫

              • Muse Gong

                beautiful

              • Teddy.15

                What a beautiful piece of poetry, loved your first stanza it's rhyme is perfect, Lizzy, I always feel it from the heart, which is where it indeed comes from. I always admire your courage and your strengths and your kindness, we who have had trauma in our lives seem truly to be those with the most empathy and compassion. You have it all. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️



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