Amen

Neville

Amen

 

Would you believe

I forgot

if I said my prayers

before bed

and again, upon my

awakening ..

I fear I might just be

subliminally

damned and no, not

sublimely ..

That would be a fine

thing now

wouldn’t it babe,

he says, smiling bigly

Amen ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 21st, 2023 01:42
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Comments7

  • Goldfinch60

    We can pray anytime during the day Neville, getting to sleep at night and getting that first cup of tea in the morning are more important. LOL

    Andy

    • Neville



      Thanks Andy, it feels good to know I'm not the only one .. Neville

    • Bobby O

      Bigly smled, he watched the
      Manchurian candidate dress nary a smile unable to resist someone else’s plan. Bigly shrugged subliminallly soon to reside w a Dalmatian and a joint and Bigly knew that type of Love , was “What I Got?”

      • Neville



        that's really BIG of ya & so very gladly enjoyed ..

        • Bobby O

          Those are two of my favorite words snd placed expertly and they were the plot and thus deserved display. You created the architectural blueprint and I just added a movie and a song.

        • orchidee

          A fine write N.

          • Neville



            Thank you kindly Steven .. much appreciated .. Neville

            • orchidee

              No adventures of KP and I today?

            • arqios

              Amen has almost exclusively been associated with prayer 🙏🏻 where it retains its core meaning of agreement: “let it be so” to what was beforehand declared.

              • Neville



                sounds about write .. cheers

              • Doggerel Dave

                This is giving me a bit of a headache....but.... I'll definitely forgo my prayers tonight, as nothing, but nothing is going to interfere with my subconscious if I can avoid it.

                • Neville



                  that tongue of yours might if you can just manage to probe about an inch and a half further .. such self inflicted lobotomies are so in vogue around these here parts .. 🤪

                • Doggerel Dave

                  After the zombies came the S.I. Lobotomies whose guiding principle would be something like 'Think not - avoid the trouble' or grunts to that effect.....

                  • Neville


                    .................. maybe ......................... perhaps ................... cheers ................... Neville

                  • Muse Gong

                    Amen。

                    • Neville


                      I'll drink to that cheers



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