Acid Days

Neville

Acid Days

 

When I lived in

a pyramid

you would feast

on dead bodies

and take

photographs

of dead crows

on a white sheet

against

a backdrop

of masturbating

angels ..

Today it seems

things

have moved on

quite a bit,  

since the acid days ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 22nd, 2023 03:40
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • arqios

    Bon voyage! Buen viaje! Gute Reise!

    • Neville



      Arigato my friend ..................... Neville

    • Teddy.15

      Happy holidays dearest Neville. ❤️ I'm not green with envy... lol ❤️ enjoy every minute of your amazing trip.

      • Neville



        Thanks so much Teddy .. I just need a break before I start putting the finishing touches to my plans for next year .. ❤️

      • 2781

        I trust you'll find a thrill in Brazil!

        • Neville



          one can only hope .. but a gentleman never tells .. still, you may read about it one day, if I do ..

          • 2781

            It's just for you

          • Christina8

            Have the happiest of holidays. You deserve this!!

            • Neville


              Thanks C .. 👍

            • orchidee

              The only acid I fancy is the stuff in lemons, etc! Bon-wotsit. I dunno any more French! lol.

            • Neville



              Cheers Steven 😎👍🍷

            • Neville



              Cheers Steven 😎👍🍷

            • Jazzy.Special

              Wowza🤩

            • Neville

            • Doggerel Dave

              Enjoy.
              Could still continue to contribute - on Ipad or summat...(just a thought, but won't hold it against you if you don't make the effort...............)

              • Neville



                Phew at least that's summat innit .. middle of the Atlantic and a dodgy mobile with no credit is my only excuse

              • Goldfinch60

                Now it is the alkali days Neville.

                Enjoy your trip.

                Andy

                • Neville



                  Thank you Andy 🙂

                • Thomas W Case

                  Safe travels. I don't know what the hell to think of your poem, but I like it.
                  Cheers

                  • Neville



                    Well at least that's something cheers .. am glad you chose not to just take a peek and sneak off .. Neville

                  • Bobby O

                    This piece and your planned saunter have the harmony of a chorus

                    • Neville



                      sounds sweet to me sir O .. many 🎶🎶🎵🎵🎵🎵🎶thanks .. Neville



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