Acid Days
When I lived in
a pyramid
you would feast
on dead bodies
and take
photographs
of dead crows
on a white sheet
against
a backdrop
of masturbating
angels ..
Today it seems
things
have moved on
quite a bit,
since the acid days ..
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: November 22nd, 2023 03:40
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Bon voyage! Buen viaje! Gute Reise!
Arigato my friend ..................... Neville
Happy holidays dearest Neville. ❤️ I'm not green with envy... lol ❤️ enjoy every minute of your amazing trip.
Thanks so much Teddy .. I just need a break before I start putting the finishing touches to my plans for next year .. ❤️
I trust you'll find a thrill in Brazil!
one can only hope .. but a gentleman never tells .. still, you may read about it one day, if I do ..
It's just for you
Have the happiest of holidays. You deserve this!!
Thanks C .. 👍
The only acid I fancy is the stuff in lemons, etc! Bon-wotsit. I dunno any more French! lol.
Cheers Steven 😎👍🍷
Cheers Steven 😎👍🍷
Wowza🤩
Enjoy.
Could still continue to contribute - on Ipad or summat...(just a thought, but won't hold it against you if you don't make the effort...............)
Phew at least that's summat innit .. middle of the Atlantic and a dodgy mobile with no credit is my only excuse
Now it is the alkali days Neville.
Enjoy your trip.
Andy
Thank you Andy 🙂
Safe travels. I don't know what the hell to think of your poem, but I like it.
Cheers
Well at least that's something cheers .. am glad you chose not to just take a peek and sneak off .. Neville
This piece and your planned saunter have the harmony of a chorus
sounds sweet to me sir O .. many 🎶🎶🎵🎵🎵🎵🎶thanks .. Neville
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