Notice of absence from Lil
If I don't respond in a few minutes I am probably at School, sleeping, with family/ friends, or forgot to bring my device.
If I don't respond in a few minutes I am probably at School, sleeping, with family/ friends, or forgot to bring my device.
Dear Mr God
Since the start...
I have been falling apart....
Since the day....
You've left me astray....
I have lost hope again!
As I have so many times in my life.....
Hope will return I hope
But I do not feel this now
The blackness outside
Before the morning comes
The deep darkness in me now
The silence of no one here
I have lost hope again
And it is still not light.
God I have lost hope on you
You weren't there
When I needed air
When I needed help
I've prayed and prayed
And it all is just the same
No one is there to help me now
Please god just help me for once
Like you did with my siblings
Well almost all of them
I'm just giving up on god there's nothing you can do
Nothing at all
Not even the greatest ball.
My life has been full of disappointment and He11
Not all but some
The only part(s) that are good
Is the love I'm experiencing
Plus not moving anymore
JUST PLEASE OPEN YOUR DOOR!!!!!
This is me and my final say
I'm giving up on god good day.
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Author:
Lil-M-M (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 14th, 2023 17:49
- Comment from author about the poem: This is for everything that has happen (besides Dom.)
- Category: Letter
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Comments4
Did you draw that? If so, it's SO good.
Yes I did and thank you so much.
dog's fiction .
I can relate. The Entity gets the credit but always ducks the blame. I’m hoping things have come together for you.
That's really great to know and all Imma say is when I said Like you did with my siblings
Well not all of them I mean 2/3 died one was drowned(murdered aka my triplet sister brother was shot once again we were triplets) and now all I have i my little sister
That’s another level Girl I will avoid trite phrase and humbly say that’s a path w more challenge than I’ve ever walked. I offer my ear as I am a patient listener w common sense. I’m also into Hip hop and jazz. https://youtu.be/sbv3oTzM6gk?si=pAERsmpZ5P6_DFO3
Check out m poem I present on video. Please?
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Hey Lil, I know sometimes it feels like God isn't there but He is. He has never left you, just pray and trust in Jesus, He is closer than you can Imagine.
Jesus loves you
Thank you that means so much.
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