Just a Few Odd Diary Notes

Neville

Just a Few Odd Diary Notes

 

Each of the following brief notes

was covertly removed from the

   long diary of a very short lived man ..

 

   Seafood and eat it ..

   See her and run like hell ..

   Seasons we must be getting older ..

 

   Now surely, two out of three aint bad ..

But then, at the end of the day,

   who’s counting ..

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 31st, 2024 04:08
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments9

  • Tom C Dylan

    Some good lines here, Neville. Feels like the out-takes from a poem.

    • Neville



      I am glad you have my back covered Tom .. thanks a bundle my friend .. Neville

    • Teddy.15

      Seafood and eat it, well when I'm anywhere near borough market that's my rule. oh who was you running from? And autumn could stay forever in my eyes. 🤗

      • Neville



        Just had me pint o prawns @ me local with a pint of iced soda water during me lunch break Teddy .. Got to keep a clear head looks like this afternoon is gonna be full on .. Neville

      • Doggerel Dave

        I have a a sneaking suspicion that some of your lines might be very well known (just not by me!) quotes from an era shared by you and I.... but with so little time and despite much benign intent ....the caravan moves on....

        • Neville



          I shall still be thumbing a lift while you are winging it .. mate but hey, wot the heck 🙂

        • orchidee

          Yes, I score two out of three. I tried the middle line, but there's no escape from KP. lol.

          • Neville



            You are nuttier than a bag of KP nuts sir ..

          • Cassie58

            Two out of three ain’t bad. That’s Meat Loaf. See her and run like hell - like a bat out of hell, more Meat Loaf.

            But these diary entries in stanza three, sound very much like you my friend. Well two of them do. Happy Monday.

            • Neville



              Your middle name aint Sherlock by any chance is it Cassie .. Longing to knock off but am grateful for the thought and back at you .. Neville

            • Accidental Poet

              The best I can offer is Meatloaf... You want 1, 2 or 3 slices? 🤪

              • Neville



                very tempting but that would be far to easy now wouldn't it .. 😎👍

              • Bobby O

                I count but I reserve the right to refuse audit and to creatively classify. When you are in “observation mode w charachature as category “ I’d be good for a two hour session deeply coasting with an inveigled communique

                • Neville



                  Jeez I love it when ya talk dirty Bobby .. cheers my friend .. Hope life is treating you good 🎶🎶🎵🎶🎶🎵🎷🎺😎👍

                  • Bobby O

                    Been in a clinical study that has has astounding results well surpassing any expectation. It is a joyous occasion.

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                  • Goldfinch60

                    So true Neville, who is counting, I'm not.

                    Andy

                    • Neville



                      there are those who will and those who won't and those who can't .. the fact that they came here at all, is all that matters .. Neville

                    • Dove

                      Oh run, and run, but you can never escape the sea!
                      🎶🎶🎶🎶 Perhaps she's just a mermaid.

                      • Neville



                        Thank you so much for indulging me my very dear friend ..



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