Metaphors of change
From one concept to another
The evolution of life
- Author: Sharon\'s Poet (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: February 4th, 2024 11:29
- Comment from author about the poem: Inspired by Teddy and sorenbarrett of which all the credit here goes to. ππ
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 26
- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
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Beautiful, all credit to you super powerful and such a beautiful thought. β€οΈ
Thanks Teddy, but between you and sorenbarret I found these words. Thank you for the inspiration. ππ
I never thought about how metaphor and change are related. Thatβs neat!
Thanks Parisab, with poetry anything is possible. ππ
A deep concept that merits more thought than a short few lines. "from one concept to another" here lies the depth of many deep seas where life began and still does in the sea of the mind.
Thanks to you and Teddy for the inspiration on this one soren. π
Good write AP.
I dunno why KP complains when I wax metaphorical with her about various varieties of trout - old ones, that is! lol.
Thanks Orchi. Maybe KP has a metaphor for you. π
A wonderful thought, the concept I''m still figuring out....
Thanks Christina, it will come to you when you least expect it to.π
So true and a good senryu AP.
Andy
Thank you Andy, it's my first, and a result from reading Teddy's and sorenbarrett's senryu. π
This is seriously so cool sir AP .. N
Seriously N, thank you. ππ
So much said, with so much spared. A mature ink this is, from you. Kudos to you, dear writer.
Thank you for reading and your kind compliment Garth. π
Well put. There are so many in this world, everything is subject to change. Great observation and so well worded.
Thanks soren, appreciate the read and comment. π
Tremendous work.
Thanks Thomas. I appreciate the compliment. ππ
What else is a metaphor eh .. π
What else is a metaphor, but a vagueness of sunshine which emanates from the heart. π«Άβ€οΈ
So much crammed into those lines. Well done. Cheers, Tom.
Thanks Tom. ππ
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