All the Wrong Buttons
I don’t
have a clue
what
the hell you
have
done to your
eyes ..
and have no
idea
what we can
do to
try and save
all the
blue in them
either ..
okay so maybe
I’m making
too much of it ..
but if I was
to ease off just
a little bit ..
and it goes
pear-shaped
or belly up ..
what on
earth would
you then
have me do ..
so maybe,
on reflection ..
it is time
now, to give
up and just
let you go blind ..
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: February 17th, 2024 02:42
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Comments11
Come on Doc - is this a diagnosis?
hysterical conversion springs to mind ................... jeez, I've seen some things
Who hasn't? Well... nah not too many round here would understand...tho I've laid it out fairly comprehensively if anyone cares to look (as you have)
Pear-shaped? Sounds like KP's face with botox! I'm horrible to her, a naughty furry G-Pig! lol.
go stand on the naughty step & hold your breath for an hour or two
Literal is possible here but I’m feeling metaphor , commentary that speaks to the fact that you’ve already been helping , already with non admittance they chose s deft dance but yet still lean toward your words as if dependent and non responsive could coexist. Did they not know you would recognize folly? Now my question for you is”where might you put that rug?”y
you got it my friend .. what else is a meta for eh' .. and whilst I thank you sincerely, you ought to know by now, a gentleman never tells .. Good to see you Bobby O .. 🎶
Oh but love is also blind, and those who behold it sometimes never see it. ❤️
I can feel you are not too far away Teddy .. ❤️
Right by your side 🌹
I always seem to push the wrong buttons. It's a freaking knack.
Write on brother .. Neville
Well, press the right button for a change then! heehee. Not necessarily directly relating to Jerry, but a comment in general.
Has the person in question tried opening their eyes? That usually helps. Well penned Sir N. 😉👍
in their minds eye, I imagine so .. maybe ..
Excellent work.
.......... Ta Tom 🙂
Never give up in life Neville, all will be well.
Andy
You bet'cha ................... 👍
I get a feeling in this poem for someone, who despite their best efforts and compassion for another, finds that perhaps the only recourse is to allow them to fail, rather than enabling. I love the way you have presented this. Don't know if I'm interpreting it correctly, but it's a great write!
Dang you are good Bella .. & no kidding neither .. Neville
Colors fading from my eyes, I don't know what to do
the suns glare is too hot... should I gaze at you?
it would be an absolute honour from where I'm laying .. 🤍
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