Notice of absence from Doggerel Dave
Not absent - still here!
Keep Calm and Carry On Poeming. đŸ˜‚
Not absent - still here!
Keep Calm and Carry On Poeming. đŸ˜‚
I’ll not be proud of my identity,
There is nothing to be achieved by that.
Place of birth, rich or poor, ethnicity
Not under my control, not worth a pat. (or for that matter spat)
But just how I played the hand I was dealt,
(To use the poker game analogy)
Mattered in the end and all else smelt
Of something rotten, a conspiracy…..
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Author:
Doggerel Dave (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 17th, 2024 03:33
- Comment from author about the poem: It’s all in the piece above. Nothing to add here. Below is available for discussion…..
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Sir ONS used the 'roll of the dice' analogy, and used loaded dice (he would!). He always won, not smelling rotten, but came up smelling of roses. lol.
You've exceeded yourself, Sir Orchi Non Sequitur here to totally confuse the other readers into believing they have a leader who will guide them into a comfortable space where they won't be required to think seriously about anything..... congratulations...
You've had long enough to get used to it mate .. wot about old dogs n new tricks eh ... You must be barking ..
... mad? In all probability.... (to use a familiar word..) perhaps....
A lot to think about there Dave. Redneck, White Trash, and Segerated South, has inspired a lot of good shit for me.
Cannot follow - sorry Jerry. Like to be more explicit?
Uncle John, always carping
Felt no need for stopping
At stoplights or signs
In the summer of 1949
Said he had no crave
Of any government faction
To tell him how to behave
At a traffic intersection
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That is a true story.
I totally disagreed with my uncle and Mom would not
let us ride with him. He was a crazy Redneck member of the KKK.
But I loved him. He taught me how to hunt and sweet-talk girls.
Should take below the line and stylistically bring it into line with the top half then pin it Jerry. I think this is the longest response from you for all time..
Still wouldn't mind an insight into what you are thinking....
The poem above the line I named
"Patriotic Fox Trot"
Below the line is another story.
I 'm a scatterbrain Dave.
Yes, lead them to comfortable space... where no thought required about anything of even minor importance! lol. They could always spend the free, non-thought time, playing snooker with Fido! A random suggestion there.
They are having troubles, I read somewhere, with random numbers in the computational space. Could you not, orchi, as you have extensive experience with random answers, advise them? Do make sure you extract a reasonable fee.
And orchi, are you proud of your identity....or not...and how have you played the game, under all those layers of BS Time for another title: Sir Orchi BS....?
We each get dealt our when coming into this world Dave and at my time of life I may not have won every time but at least I am still in the game.
Andy
But are you proud to be Andy, a British gentleman....?
So true Dave. This piece is easily relatable.
What you do in & with life is the only part that matters! Nice poetry!
Not sure I like 'nice' - that's the last thing....
Let's go sus you out...
So true. Excellent work.
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