It's Not Cool. It's Rude.

Tom Dylan


Notice of absence from Tom Dylan
*NO LONGER POSTING AS GETTING ERROR MESSAGE*
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I text you but you don't text back,

I make you a brew, you don't say thanks,

I say good morning, you just look blank.

It's not cool, it's rude.

 

You drive like you're in a race,

can't keep that look of disdain

from your face,

when it comes to dating, you don't chase.

It's not cool, it's rude.

 

You ask a question and ignore my replies,

when I talk your roll your eyes,

you'd ruin your best friend's 

birthday surprise.

It's not cool, it's rude.

 

On the times when you did not respond

I felt like I'd done something wrong,

now I see I was right all along.

It's not me, it's you. 

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  • Doggerel Dave

    😂You tell 'em Tom - sort 'em out.
    I enjoyed that very much.

    • Tom Dylan

      Thanks, Dave. Appreciated. I was chunnering to myself at certain friends and family who just don't reply to texts etc. It's not cool, it's rude.. and I thought, hmm that has a ring to it.. 🙂

      • Doggerel Dave

        You lead me into new territory, Tom. Never heard (or read) of the word 'chunnering' before so had to explore new territory in differentiating between that and 'chuntering' and did in fact become mightily confused with another very similar word, to whit 'chundering' (Aust inf).
        The kind of education I receive at MPS is (occasionally) without peer.

        • Tom Dylan

          Haha.. yeah, I do tend to use chunnering a lot.. means to grumble. Not sure if it's a common word in the North West UK or if it's just me! 🙂

          • Doggerel Dave

            Don't go lashing yourself about it will you.....

          • Cassie58

            Mustn’t grumble, mustn’t grumble, but you are and so would I, it is rude Tom. You have my heartfelt support. Nothing worse than being treated with indifference. I enjoyed my visit here and hope you have a happy Monday. You conveyed your feelings well in this poem.

            • Tom Dylan

              Thanks, Cassie. Happy Monday to you too! 🙂

            • orchidee

              Yep, it's educational on 'ere, innit?! lol. It's not any old rubbish.

              • Tom Dylan

                Oh yes, very educational! 🙂

              • Accidental Poet

                Some people just don't get it, and might never get it. These people border on being Narcissism. Great write. 👍

                • Tom Dylan

                  Thanks a lot, AP. Appreciated. 🙂

                • Neville



                  I quite agree, very rude indeed sir Tom
                  yessireeeee I get this very muchly ..

                  • Tom Dylan

                    Thanks, Neville. Appreciated. 🙂

                  • Bella Shepard

                    I couldn't agree with you more. As my mom would say "there's no excuse for rudeness". Unfortunately, rudeness seems to have become acceptable these days, and even applauded in some of our leaders. Good write, you hit the nail on the proverbial head!

                    • Tom Dylan

                      Thanks a lot, Bella. Appreciated.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      So very true with some people Tom.

                      Andy

                      • Tom Dylan

                        Thanks, Andy. Really appreciated.

                      • Lil

                        Its very true some people are just rude. And its hard. Well written

                        Lil

                        • Tom Dylan

                          Thanks a lot, Lil. Really appreciate your comments.

                          • Lil

                            No problem. I really love reading your poem.

                          • Thomas W Case

                            I relate. Great work.

                            • Tom Dylan

                              Thanks a lot, Thomas. Really appreciated.

                            • Mase ♪

                              Every Peice fits so Perfect with each other. Well written, Tom

                              • Tom Dylan

                                Thanks a lot, Mason. Really appreciated. Cheers, Tom.



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