Arc

Neville

Arc

 

the gentlest arc ..

   the most subtle of curves ..

   that portion of air displaced by her smile ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 1st, 2024 05:04
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  • Alan R

    Very beautiful imagery

    • Neville


      I can't believe my luck .. I am so glad you were passing by Sir Alan .. many thanks my friend .. Neville

      • Alan R

        🙂

      • orchidee

        In KP's case, the portion of air is a cavern - a trout-mouth!
        She'll serve me up for lunch soon - squeak squeak!

        • Neville



          there are no flies on her it seems .. but there may well be on you soon enough ..

        • Cassie58

          Won’t cost you a dime but can be priceless. A little gem here Neville . Brevity can say so much. Wishing you a grand weekend:)

          • Neville



            thank you so much Cassie .. and you too ..

          • Parisab

            Your descriptions have their uniques touch on every image, including a simple smile! Beauty does not escape you, my poetic friend…

            • Neville



              You ma'am are always so very kind and far too good for words .. Thankyou P .. Neville

            • Teddy.15

              Wow so profound beautiful and so delicate in imagery 😊

              • Neville


                That's my gurl .. I love wows .. bless you Teddy .. 💐

              • Thomas W Case

                Tremendous work

                • Neville



                  Much appreciated Tom .. Neville

                • Doggerel Dave

                  Garn - the air's just misdirection, 'twas the smile wot got you going....

                  The gentlest of poems.

                  • Neville



                    Bless you sir .. Neville

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Beautiful and most understand of words Neville.

                    Andy

                    • Neville



                      Cheers Andy .. Cheques in the post .. Neville

                    • Rocky Lagou

                      YES!

                      • Neville



                        Ditto ........................ thanks muchly Rocky .. nice pic by the way .. Neville

                      • Cloie

                        Your poem beautifully captures the elegance of a smile! It's so warm and positive. Great job!

                        • Neville



                          I am honoured that you should smile down so favourably upon my little scribble Cloie .. bless you .. Neville

                        • Dove

                          Awesome! I picture pink puckered pretty lips

                          • Neville



                            Becuz ya wurf it I just put the cheque in the post .. Bless you 🤍

                          • Bella Shepard

                            You create an ambiance of comfort, and sweet familiarity in these three, visually pleasing lines. Subtle and oh so beautiful!

                            • Neville



                              Every now and then words just fail me .. like now for example .. I want to say more than a mere thank you and truly and nice but ... 💛a golden heart will have to suffice .. 🙂

                              • Bella Shepard

                                A golden heart is much appreciated!



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