Arc
the gentlest arc ..
the most subtle of curves ..
that portion of air displaced by her smile ..
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Neville (
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Very beautiful imagery
I can't believe my luck .. I am so glad you were passing by Sir Alan .. many thanks my friend .. Neville
🙂
In KP's case, the portion of air is a cavern - a trout-mouth!
She'll serve me up for lunch soon - squeak squeak!
there are no flies on her it seems .. but there may well be on you soon enough ..
Won’t cost you a dime but can be priceless. A little gem here Neville . Brevity can say so much. Wishing you a grand weekend:)
thank you so much Cassie .. and you too ..
Your descriptions have their uniques touch on every image, including a simple smile! Beauty does not escape you, my poetic friend…
You ma'am are always so very kind and far too good for words .. Thankyou P .. Neville
Wow so profound beautiful and so delicate in imagery 😊
That's my gurl .. I love wows .. bless you Teddy .. 💐
Tremendous work
Much appreciated Tom .. Neville
Garn - the air's just misdirection, 'twas the smile wot got you going....
The gentlest of poems.
Bless you sir .. Neville
A description I'm very familiar with and lives within me. Beautifully put N. 🌹
Thank you brother AP .. 🌹😉
Beautiful and most understand of words Neville.
Andy
Cheers Andy .. Cheques in the post .. Neville
YES!
Ditto ........................ thanks muchly Rocky .. nice pic by the way .. Neville
Your poem beautifully captures the elegance of a smile! It's so warm and positive. Great job!
I am honoured that you should smile down so favourably upon my little scribble Cloie .. bless you .. Neville
Awesome! I picture pink puckered pretty lips
Becuz ya wurf it I just put the cheque in the post .. Bless you 🤍
You create an ambiance of comfort, and sweet familiarity in these three, visually pleasing lines. Subtle and oh so beautiful!
Every now and then words just fail me .. like now for example .. I want to say more than a mere thank you and truly and nice but ... 💛a golden heart will have to suffice .. 🙂
A golden heart is much appreciated!
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