Once more I look back,
Look back on my long life
And see how wonderful it was,
And in that time I met wonderful people,
Many became friends
And we would do anything for each other.
I worked all my life,
Never being out of work
Until that day came,
That day when I retired into my life,
A life full of love, music and wonder.
Yes there was sadness,
Sadness when my wife of forty years
Passed from this mortal coil.
But then a couple of years later
I met her,
Met the new lady, my new love.
Our love so strong
We just do not understand it,
Cannot understand it after losing,
Losing our loved ones.
But we have this love,
A love so strong.
So after looking back,
Looking back at my good life,
I can look forward,
Look forward to a better life.
- Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 6th, 2024 02:03
- Comment from author about the poem: Never give up on life, new wonders are there for you.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 19
- Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Bella Shepard, NikNak73
Comments10
A clear message.Good wife Good Life.Well done sir.
So very true David, thank you.
Andy
Good on the pair of you .. and
remember,
it aint over till the fat lady sings ..
So true Neville, thank you.
https://youtu.be/mDeFdGzthV0?si=a9GPZdyOeH9cNpCJ
Andy
Good write Gold.
In my imaginary life with KP life only goes backwards, i.e. worse! lol.
Thank you Orchi.
Once more I look back,
Look back on my long life
And see how wonderful it was
And still is dear Andy, your reflection is simply lovely 🌹
Most kind Teddy, thank you for your wonderful words.
Andy
Gratitude for the past and hopeful anticipation of the future are keys to hippieness my friend. Wonderful write
So very true soren, thank you.
Andy
A lovely poem. Wonderful sentiments.
Most kind Tom, thank you.
Andy
They say as one door closes, another door opens. Your past life and new life are both wonderful lives. I believe that makes you Andy a wonderful man with a wonderful life. Excellent music also. 😉👍
Yes AP I have been through many doors and they led me to the wonderful life I have now.
Andy
"That day when I retired into my life", an incredible line I will never forget. This poem, so beautifully phrased dear Andy, captures perfectly the life worth living, the love worth more than all the gold in the world. The perfect song, the perfect video, the perfect tribute to your love of life and Mary.
So very kind Bella, I truly appreciated your words.
Andy.
Fabulous work.
Thank you Thomas, much appeciated.
Andy
This poem beautifully captures the bittersweet journey of looking back on cherished memories while also finding hope and love in the future. Great work!
Thank you Cloie, most kind.
Andy
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