If true love has such spiritual dimension
then I trust that someday it will find me
and as I wait
I ask myself
all the questions sitting
impatiently on my mind
reflecting on…
courtly love
forbidden love
self-love
storge love
and of course
divine love
those so deeply in love?
for example...
Romeo and Juliet
knowing such intimacy exists
yet never to bring them
to their union as soulmates
a love
forbidden by others
knowing
it was to lead them
to a death of a sinister kind
they did it anyway
because they were in fact soulmates
thus, finding love
living happily ever after
isn’t just a myth
to those whom have experienced
such love?
I myself do believe
after all
surely
even just to experience
that spiritual dimension
for one single moment whilst I breathe
makes the loss so much less painful
eternally giving it
it's very own pedestal.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: March 8th, 2024 03:08
- Category: Love
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Comments9
well that's love wrapped up, beautifully bound and presented to the world .. this treatise on the subject was indeed a real treat .. please pardon the play on words
🌹Neville
I couldn't imagine ever covering it all dear Nev, I'll leave that to the future however I'm so very grateful for your approval 💕 🌹 happy Friday dear friend.
Brava dear poetess. My feelings exactly. 😉👍🌹
Your Italian is very good dear A.P thank you for the thumbs up my dear friend. 🌹
OK, confession time. I remember you told me before, but I couldn't remember it here, so I had to resort to google to figure it out. But a fantastic poem Teddy. It puts words to my own thoughts on true love. 🌹
lol for ladies it's brava for gentlemen it's bravo, so bravo yes it's a beautiful language but so many rules maschi e femmine 🌹 grazie mille caro Amico.
um ya right, what you said 🫤
On the subject of love , dear Teddy you have it buttoned up. So many beautiful poems you have penned, and another here. You have included Romeo and Juliet, that tragic pair in this offering. Such an elegant piece of writing. You ask yourself all the questions and many others ask the very same. Have a fabulous weekend dear poet.
Thank you dearest Cassie58 your warm charm is most felt on my pages, happy weekend. 🌹
So beautiful. Powerful work Teddy.
Thank you so much dear Thomas. 🌹
Teddy, I've said all I want to say about poetic love, and I don't want to spoil the party....so I will delete....on the other hand... Good for True Love in keeping away, 'cos it motivates you to write some fun, interesting poetry...
lol thanks Dave. 🌹 My lot in life really to question those four words in everyway possible ❤️
Very Bronte in style, so romantic and mystical …happy international women’s day dear Teddy …
Awe thank you, I hope you had a lovely day too dear Parisab. 🌹
Beautiful lovelorn words Teddy, I am sure that you have found love.
Andy
Thank you dear Andy. 🌹
Love as a word in English is such a complex word. It can mean so many things from passion to adoration. It is ambiguous and covers so many emotions. Very nicely written in first person making it so much more personal. Lovely no pun intended.
Thank you so much dear sorrenbarret, always wonder what you think of it all. 🌹
You have the gift of words dear Teddy; finding them, arranging them in the most pleasing way, bestowing them with emotion, so that they leap from the screen in this beautiful ode to love, placed oh so gently on that pedestal.
Dear Bella, thank you so much dear friend. A subject very close to my heart. 🌹 ❤️
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