That Gift of A Feeling
The gift you gave me was more than
a feeling, wasn’t it ..
It felt so amazing, almost impossible
to better or beat ..
It felt like something, other worldly ..
Then afterwards,
how lovely were the thoughts that
sprang to mind when
you caught your breath and dared
to touch me, all over again ..
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Neville (
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Good write N.
My poem begins:
And then KP touched me
A feeling of an old trout
And of something fishy going on....
Maybe you need to see a doctor
If KP's not fully human but trout-like, neither is Waitrose. Why they not have any bog rolls in now? Of course, snobbish people like them never use the loo - it's too 'common'!
Romantic to the core. You have described here the unforgettable moments of falling in love. Now surely that is out of this world and borders on the heavenly. Those memories last a life time and do not fade. Have a very happy Sunday Neville, though I fear it is going to be wet and could spoil our bbq.
Bless you Cassie .. although it looks a little hazy over yonder, I am hoping it will turn out to be just fine .. well not just fine but I reckon you get what I mean .. and I shall keep my 🤞that your sausages have the happy ending they re made for .. Neville
Wonderful lovelorn words Neville, I hope it never stops.
Andy
thank you Andy .. now wouldn't that be lovely .. Neville
Dude , smooth, ….,WASNT it ?
On one read it skated by me as matter of fact but what if that last line was born of amazement ? It sets it up perfectly.
SMH
Bless you Bobby O ..
Reminds me of someone very special as I'm sure this was penned for someone just as special to you N. 🌹
You got that one write mate .. spot on 🌹
😎👍
And now a song from me 'Feelings, ohhh feelings,... trying to forget those feelings of love - no of trout!' Morris Albert, 1975 song.
Fido says - Orchi, sometimes you're the most unfeeling wretch towards KP, you guinea-pig creature, you!' lol.
love makes the world go round. You capture the rapture of love here.
I do believe it helps .. particularly with our evolution .. long live the evolution .. 🙂
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