Along My River I walk,
But it is now Our River
As my lover is by my side,
Holding each other’s hand
Two people so in love.
I look at Our River and see,
See our reflection,
And see two lovers,
Two lovers made for each other.
Our River flows gently passed,
The swans and geese sailing,
Sailing gently with us
As we all journey on our path,
Our path along Our River,
Our River to eternity,
To eternity and beyond.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: My River has become Our River.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments10
Love your river x.
So do I 2781, will be with it again today. Thank you.
Andy
A fine write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
A lovely poem. And nice touch with the Casablanca clip.
Most kind Tom, thank you,
Andy
How absolutely lovely is that .. and what a great clip you have treated us all to too .. Neville
Very much appreciated Neville, than you.
Andy
Mr Finch, descriptive snd gripping and for me, I wanted more. Thought of you as I watched two great documentaries.
The Jazz Baroness - informs how Nika Rothschild gave up an heiress lifestyle to become best friends w Thelonious Monk
1959 - the year that changed Jazz
It concentrated on 4 lp’s
Kind of Blue - Miles
Time Out - Dave Brubeck
Ah Hum - Charlie Mingus
The Shape of things to Come- Ornette Coleman
Knowledge and more
Most kind Bobby.
I have three of those albums but not the Charlie Mingus one, that can be sorted though.
Andy
Way too cool. I love our Jazzy conversations.
A great metaphor here Andy a river like a path or trail is a guide to the future but is more defining in its image flowing only one way. A beautiful scene set with images giving a sense of peace and tranquility in the journey leaving a feeling of contentment. Nicely done Andy
You are so right soren, thank you very much for your kind words.
Andy
I've known you long enough to know there have been times you have walked along the river alone, after joy passed away so to have this new found love with another soulmate Mary, probably makes you one of the luckiest gentlemen on earth. 🌹
You are so right Teddy, you know me well.
Yes I am so very lucky in my life, thank you.
Andy 🌹🌹🌹
Superb work.
Thank you Thomas.
Andy
You paint a scene of perfect harmony. A wonderful write Andy. Every happiness to you both. All the best.
So vert kind Cassie, thank you very much.
Andy
This is quite beautiful.Out of all the rivers in all the world you were lucky enough to find this one.Wonderful
Thank you David, very much appreciated.
Andy
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