Sucker Punched
After the dream,
reality hit ..
Delivering with it
one hell
of a sucker punch
and simultaneous
knee to the groin ..
It felt like
some kind of
unanaesthetised,
outer body thing ..
A near death
experience perhaps ..
But then,
whatever it was ..
I swear, I shall never
try to touch
her there, ever again ..
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: June 7th, 2024 03:04
- Comment from author about the poem: Don't try this at home folks .. 🤍
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And nary shall he be again unwise
a lesson learnt the hard way is invariably long remembered .. cheers Bobby
Ouch! That really packed a punch! Literally. 🙂
it was meant to .. thanks for the confirmation Tom 🙂
I swoon before I ever touch KP 'there'. lol.
Ow, guess you've learned a lesson there....very good write!
..............................................Yep I'm now confined to the norty step 🙂
Oops, deleted your comment somehow - your reply to me - while trying to delete an empty 'comments' box of my own.
You commented something like 'I don't want to 'go there'.
Who can bear it! lol.
Woof! Now you've been and done it, say Fido to me.
I wasn't offended. How dare I delete your comments except unwittingly. lol. Sincere apologies, grovel, grovel, and all that guff!
Believe me it takes a lot more than a few deletives to offend yours truly .. but I have found out where your hutch is and have set gin traps all along the path to your water bowl ..
Arggh! I'm half G/P, half human! lol.
Lol. Hysterical. I'm dealing with writer's groups, far far away and they have that kind of reaction and I didn't even touch them there. Lol
How touching, I am intrigued .. are you even going to try tho .. 😎👍
Yep I got one of them, possibly slightly (but not much) lighter. A lesson learnt very early. The current permission/consent movement is still trying to catch up!
this here norty step needs an extension .. cheers for the self disclosure Dave
One must be very careful where one places their hands Neville.
Andy
One must be careful where one places anything these days .. except for their pens ..
One trial learning? Loved the unexpected ending.
I am indeed both honoured and grateful to you my friend .. Neville
Wow! 😮
A very captivating
poem and
story indeed!
A lesson learned
the hard way.. 😂😂
My pleasure to read!!
Best regards, peace ✌️
Thad
Many thanks Thad and all sentiments positively reciprocated .. Neville 😊👍
OUCh!! 🤕
A lesson learned
the hard way!! 😂
Thank you for
sharing this
with us today!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thanks again Thad .. 😊👍
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