Wicked

Christina8

Time is such a wicked whore

Always taking, wanting more

She's not even keeping score

Stealing my youth and my soul

 

Draining the life from my eyes

Making it so I'm no grand prize

Telling the most nasty lies

Stealing my youth and my soul

 

Please love me despite it all

Don't make me beg or crawl

I've loved you since the fall

Keeping me feeling whole

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  • peto

    Wonderful write with great rhyme
    Christina is back
    Worth the wait

    • Christina8

      I appreciate your kind review, it is so appreciated!!
      You make me want to think and start writing again.
      Again, thanks for your support!

    • Goldfinch60

      Wonderful words Christina, good to see you back.

      Andy

      • Christina8

        Thank you and I appreciate your kind feedback!

      • orchidee

        I have 'time' to say good write C.

        • Christina8

          Thanks Orchi I appreciate it!!

        • Neville


          I can't help but wonder how on earth I missed this .. it must have been posted when I was absent .. It is without doubt my favourite Christina8 yet .. Neville

          • Christina8

            Yes you were absent...I am absolutely humbled by your wonderful comment! Thanks, I feel inspired to write some more, we'll see lol

          • sorenbarrett

            Loved the rhyme to this one it flowed so nicely. So glad to hear from you again.

            • Christina8

              Absolutely. So good to hear from you also and I appreciate your kind feedback.

            • rhmn_7

              I loved your "unique" description of time!!!

              • Christina8

                Thank you so much!!!

              • Rocky Lagou

                Ahhh I love it! Right off the bat, with the first line, I was already riveted to this divine poem and grand statement on the duality of time. We love it and hate it. It reminds me of a song I wrote quite literally entitled: "Time is an Unsympathetic Bitch."

                • Christina8

                  Really? I'll have to read that. Thank you for your kind words, Rocky!!



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