Time is such a wicked whore
Always taking, wanting more
She's not even keeping score
Stealing my youth and my soul
Draining the life from my eyes
Making it so I'm no grand prize
Telling the most nasty lies
Stealing my youth and my soul
Please love me despite it all
Don't make me beg or crawl
I've loved you since the fall
Keeping me feeling whole
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 26th, 2024 14:50
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- Users favorite of this poem: peto, Qurrathul Ain, 𓆩Mase𓆪, rhmn_7, Rocky Lagou
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Comments7
Wonderful write with great rhyme
Christina is back
Worth the wait
I appreciate your kind review, it is so appreciated!!
You make me want to think and start writing again.
Again, thanks for your support!
Wonderful words Christina, good to see you back.
Andy
Thank you and I appreciate your kind feedback!
I have 'time' to say good write C.
Thanks Orchi I appreciate it!!
I can't help but wonder how on earth I missed this .. it must have been posted when I was absent .. It is without doubt my favourite Christina8 yet .. Neville
Yes you were absent...I am absolutely humbled by your wonderful comment! Thanks, I feel inspired to write some more, we'll see lol
Loved the rhyme to this one it flowed so nicely. So glad to hear from you again.
Absolutely. So good to hear from you also and I appreciate your kind feedback.
I loved your "unique" description of time!!!
Thank you so much!!!
Ahhh I love it! Right off the bat, with the first line, I was already riveted to this divine poem and grand statement on the duality of time. We love it and hate it. It reminds me of a song I wrote quite literally entitled: "Time is an Unsympathetic Bitch."
Really? I'll have to read that. Thank you for your kind words, Rocky!!
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