Breathing In Music.

Goldfinch60



A piece of music came on,

Came on the radio.

I stopped,

Stopped writing and listened,

All I could do was listen and breathe.

Long breaths in,

Long breaths out,

And just listened,

Listened to the wonder,

The wonder of Mozart.

Each breath I took

Brought in good air

And took out the bad air.

The wonder of life was breathed in,

The bad things breathed out.

That’s all I did,

Breathe in and out

And listen,

Listen with joy,

And my day started,

Started on those notes,

Those wonderful notes

Leaving me knowing,

Knowing that today would be wonderful.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 3rd, 2024 01:12
  • Comment from author about the poem: The piece of music in the video is what I was listening to, one of the comments on YouTube said: "Mozart stole this music from the angels while they were sleeping"
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 30
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Comments8

  • orchidee

    Mozart stole the music from angels, but Stockhausen stole it from the dung heap?! lol.

    • Goldfinch60

      Accordign to Sir Thomas Beecham that is so true Orchi.

      Andy

    • Neville



      it only takes that one little thing doesn't it .. to make or break a day ..

      • Goldfinch60

        It certainly does Neville, thank you.

        Andy

      • Teddy.15

        If this isn't passion I don't know what is. 🌹

        • Goldfinch60

          Such very kind words Teddy, thank you.

          Andy

        • sorenbarrett

          Love the image of breathing music. Like air there is the pure and the polluted. Some so used to the polluted do not notice the difference. Nicely done Gold

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you soren for your words, much appreciated.

            Andy

          • 2781

            I was introduced to Mozart, a little lost, driving (in the spring), over the snowy mountains highway. I hit seek on the radio...
            It was magical.

            • Goldfinch60

              Mozart is the finest composer there is, IO have listened to him for many years. Thank you or your words soren, enjoy Mozarr.

              Andy

            • MendedFences27

              Not only does it take your breath away, but also, all of your troubles. Just the beauty of it! - Phil A

              • Goldfinch60

                So very treu AP, thank you.

                Andy

              • Thad Wilk

                A wonderful
                uplifting poem!! ✨
                Loved the
                music too! 😍 🎵 🎶 🎶
                Awesome read
                much enjoyed
                thank you!! 😊
                Best regards ✌️ Thad

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Thad for your kind words, very much appreciated.

                  Andy

                • Dan Williams

                  The power of music always amazes me. It is the only truly universal language.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    You are so right Dan, thank you for your comments.

                    Andy



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