Another day on the field
Trying to knock a ball through a hoop,
But on this day it was not important,
Not important to me
As I was surrounded by beauty,
The beauty of Nature surrounded me.
The woodlands full of green
As they sloped up the hills,
The horizon going up and down,
Not a building in sight
As the forests soared around,
Their glory covering the land.
I would look up,
Look up to the bright blue sky,
So clear and alluring
With the occasional white cloud
Floating gently in the blue.
Best of all was she was there,
My lover was there
And between matches
We would sit close together
And share our love with the glory,
The glory of Nature.
So, there we were,
Me, Mary and Nature
Joining in the wonder,
The wonder of our life,
Our life together.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: On this day the croquet took second place in my day.
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Comments10
A fine write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
Good on you n Mary my friend you can beat an egg but you can't beat a bit o love and nature .. Neville
Thank you Neville, so very true.
Andy
A beautiful and fulfilling write Gold. Nice way to start a day.
So kind soren, thank you.
Andy
Wonderful imagery, Andy. Two lovers sitting in Adirondack chairs enjoying the day and a game.
Thank you Jerry, if only we had those chairs, we were sitting on a bench but it was still wonderful.
Andy
Most enjoyable imagery. Putting aside the competition for Love and nature. Life is beautiful. - Phil A
Thank you Phil an so true, love and Nature are so important in our lives.
Andy
Tremendous work.
Most kind Thomas.
Andy
Awwww, you have
painted a most splendid scene!! 🙏
And with the love of your life. 💕
Thanks for sharing!
So picturesque and serene! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Your comments are very much appreciated Thad.
Andy
What an incredible picture you paint with your words, the rhapsody of love and nature. Beautiful poem and beautiful music to boot.
Thank you Bella, very much appreciate your words.
Andy
Romantic and full of gratitude. She certainly brings out the very best in you dear Andy. 🌹
So kind Teddy, thank you.
Andy
A lovely write. You paint the picture perfectly.
Thank you for your kind words Tom.
Andy
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