Home Another Way.

Goldfinch60



Home we came,

Home from our break,

Our break to our favourite place.

Along the Isle we went

To the ferry port,

Drove onto the ferry

And sailed gently,

Gently across the Solent.

Drove off the ferry,

Put the sat nav on,

Only another hundred and thirty miles,

A hundred and thirty miles to go.

The sat nav showed road closures

So it took us a different way,

A different way than normal.

It took us to places we had never seen,

Through towns and villages

But we were never held up.

We passed ponies and donkeys,

Cows and sheep

Wondering over the roads.

We saw horses looking in a shop!

We saw some great fun things,

We arrived home at the time we expected

In spite of not going our normal way,

So the sat nav got it right.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 13th, 2024 00:52
  • Comment from author about the poem: The sat nav got it right.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 35
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • Michael Edwards

    Good to see you are still writing - hope you're keeping well Andy.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Michael, so good to hear from you.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A fine write Gold.

    • Doggerel Dave

      Serendipitous satnav.

      • Goldfinch60

        Very true Dave.

        Andy

      • Neville



        You must have the deluxe model

        • Goldfinch60

          It seems that way Neville.

          Andy

        • 2781

          I had an American I couldn't get along with her, we just didn't understand each other. The Aussie that looks after me now is brilliant.
          Happy day's.

          • Goldfinch60

            So pleased about that 2781, mine is an English lady and seems to know her way. LOL

            Andy

            • 2781

              Nothing like a local.

            • Teddy.15

              LOL I don't use sat nav because I'd seriously end up at the top of a tree lol 🀣 someone in Florence ended up on the tram-via lines, it's much like the train tracks but fortunately for them, they were saved lol no no I get lost on a daily basis but without the sat nav.. very entertaining and very relatable 🌹

              • Goldfinch60

                I am sure that you will always find the places you need to go Teddy.
                Andsy

              • Accidental Poet

                Sometimes the unexpected bonus is the return home, πŸ˜πŸ‘

                • Goldfinch60

                  It surely is AP. Thank you.

                  Andy

                • sorenbarrett

                  The road not taken? or at least not taken before. A fun read Gold and a reminder of all the seldom taken roads I have seen. Thanks for the memories.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Very true soren, some of the roads that I have taken in my life have led me to some wonderful times.

                    Andy

                  • BlessedbyGod

                    Sometimes that’s the best thing that can happen, a blessing in disguise,
                    I’m glad you had a joyful trip

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Very true Melissa, thank you.

                      Andy

                    • MendedFences27

                      Wonderful. Often times a forced change brings new and rewarding experiences. A fine poem showing that some of today's new tech actually works and is of value. - Phil A.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Very true Phil, we can certainly ave some very rewarding experiences.

                        Andy

                      • Tom Dylan

                        Love this, Andy. The scenic route! Can't beat it! The road less travelled, you could say. πŸ™‚

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Thank you Tom. Yes very true.

                          Andy



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