Determined chaos

sorenbarrett

Control an illusion
Power dissolves in smoke
Unity from division 
Pieces a single picture
Choice governed
Music from individual notes
Dancing harmony 
Chaos in pattern
A straight line in circles

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Online Online)
  • Published: September 1st, 2024 05:43
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 64
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Why, oh why, do you hereby remind me of those black-n-white photos my parents took of their firstborn trying in vain to grasp the stream of water steadily coming out of the kitchen faucet?!

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you Cheeky I appreciate the read and review the comment brings back old memories

      • Cheeky Missy

        All the more reason to smile!

      • Teddy.15

        And all that jazz, yes this is wonderful. 🌹

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you, Teddy another cryptic one

        • orchidee

          A fine write SB.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks for the read Orchi

          • Dan Williams

            Thought provoking and your trademark economy of words gets the job done.

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you, Dan for your review. It is most appreciated as is your comment.

            • Goldfinch60

              Super words again soren bringing opposites together once more.

              Andy

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you, Andy your comment is appreciated. Have a nice day.



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