And All That's Gold

Teddy.15

 

Dancing shadows of leaves
tells me it's autumn
 
colorful shades
turning from bright green
to yellow and pink
pumpkin orange
then to soft rusty brown
 
warm sunshine beaming
through the, soon to be
skeleton of the great oak
 
and all the while

I’m wondering…
 
how could the transition
from this now, sleeping summer
be so darn glorious?

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 3rd, 2024 13:54
  • Comment from author about the poem: My favourite season of all.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 27
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cassie58, Qurrathul Ain
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  • Tony36

    Awesome write

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you dear Tony36 🌹

      • Tony36

        You're welcome

      • sorenbarrett

        I love the reference to fall as a sleeping summer. A most glorious right about autumn in all of its splendor.

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you dear sorrenbarret here the summers are so hard and hot I always look forward to this time of year. 🌹

        • Thomas W Case

          My favorite season too. Beautiful work, sweet Teddy.

          • Teddy.15

            Sweet Thomas, thank you kindly Sir. 🌹

          • Doggerel Dave

            Couldn't agree with your love of Autumn more, Teddy

            An added note: I wish it were Autumn here now in all its glory, as it would mean we have survived Summer......

            • Teddy.15

              Survived summer, it's like that here too, this was the hottest August since 2015 apparently, I was lucky to spend time at the sea but it's still like being in an over at 220c. Thank you, may this coming season of summer be kind to you. 🌹

            • Goldfinch60

              And my favourite season Teddy, Nature's artwork at its best.

              Andy

              • Teddy.15

                Yes indeed dear Andy, it is one of the most beautiful moments in England too. Thank you. 🌹

              • Cassie58

                Your words are a glorious autumm palette dear Teddy. So rich in colour. Beautiful poetry. Have a wonderful Wednesday. 🌹

                • Teddy.15

                  Thank you so much dear Cassie, happy Wednesday to you. 🌹

                • Rocky Lagou

                  I love this painting of the season! Quite the transitional poem and honestly so wonderfully executed. Thx for the poem

                  • Teddy.15

                    Thank you dear Rocky. 🌹

                  • Dan Williams

                    Hard pressed to call any of the seasons my favorite, you seem to know why. Nice work. I like it.

                    • Teddy.15

                      Thank you dear Dan. 🌹

                    • Parisab

                      warm sunshine beaming
                      through the, soon to be
                      skeleton of the great oak

                      Beautiful way to describe how the oak doesn’t know of his demise in the next season (as the sun is beaming through it) very lovely Teddy…

                      • Teddy.15

                        Hello dear Parisab, lovely to see you, what a gorgeous season, too hot here in Italy in the summer, now.we have some stunning scenes coming our way. 🌹 Thank you so much.

                      • tallisman

                        So true…

                        • Teddy.15

                          Thank you. 🌹



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