Like loves young dream
She came into my life
Her smile such a glorious gleam
It cut me like a knife.
Us two became like one
Never falling apart
And having so much fun
We stole each other’s heart.
Our love became so strong
That increased every second
To each other we now belong
With a love that had beckoned.
Us old codgers cannot believe it
In our seventies with love we were hit.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 6th, 2024 01:10
- Comment from author about the poem: We are both in our mid seventies and just cannot believe the the strength of our love for each other.
- Category: Love
- Views: 52
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Comments11
Your happiness is everyone's happiness, and may it continue always. 🌹
So kind Teddy, thank you so much.
Andy
Your happiness is everyone's happiness, and may it continue always. 🌹
So kind Teddy, thank you so much.
Andy
Again.LOL
A fine write Gold.
Thank you Orchi.
Love, no snow age Andy. A tender and lovely write. May that love last forever
So true soren, much appreciated.
Andy
A lovely piece. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Tom, much appreciated.
Andy
Awesome poem,
so romantically penned! 😍
Sounds like this romance
will never end! Congrats! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you Thad, you are right this love will only get stronger each moment.
Andy
Wonderful dear Andy. Long may that happiness bless your lives. Love is ageless. A lovely poem. Have a happy weekend.
Thank you very much for your very kind words Cassie, love certainly is ageless.
Andy
The joy you share here is an inspiration, Live long and Love. - Phil A.
Much appreciated Phil, thank you.
Andy
Tremendous sonnet.
Thank you Thomas.
Andy
I've waited the twelve hours of my shift and now finally after, now I'm home, to listen to your superb accompaniment which was bound to suit your proffer lines. Ooh! You've a gift and blessing which cannot be bought, methinks, and how sweet it is to listen to you describe and delineate what you two lovebirds know so well. I love it! Thank you for sharing!
Thank you very much for your lovely words Missy, very much appreciated.
Andy
I am nearly overcome with jealousy. Fate decided I would spend these last years alone, Oh well. Nice work.
Sorry to hear that Dan, I thought the same when my wife Joyce died we were married for 38 years but I was so lucky when Mary came into my life a couple of years later.
We never know what our future will bring.
Andy
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